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What Is True And Real Love..........
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What Is True And Real Love.......... |
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garysgirl  
since 2002-09-29
Posts 19237Florida, USA 
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What is true and real, eternal love happening instantly, spontaneously Is it automatic Or Is it a feeling, and emotion ever growing derived from dedication, determination, inspiration, faith, LOVE A Feeling Built upon from a foundation, a steady beginning by two people who love, care for each other With Passion within, chemistry between two individuals with a strong desire to work together to have love last, forever and eternal Un-dyingLove [This message has been edited by garysgirl (01-08-2003 09:18 PM).] |
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neveah5 Member
since 2002-11-22
Posts 197Ohio |
Very good question Ethel..wish I knew the answer myself |
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kayjay Member Elite
since 2002-06-24
Posts 2015Oregon |
It really is no mystery The word you seek is chemistry Just how it works is any guess But tells you true who you love best I like the vulnerability you've put in your writing lately. KJ Through rubble and trouble and dark of night |
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A Tone of Voice Member
since 2001-07-18
Posts 287 |
perhaps it's a little of each......thought provoking question, lovely writing~! *S* ATOv~ ~I envy those who have perfected the art of being~ |
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regards2you Member Elite
since 2002-10-01
Posts 3940California |
Ethel, Intersting and thought provoking. Enjoyed, Hugs Pat ..without surrender, be on good terms with all persons.. |
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Kitty** Member
since 1999-07-27
Posts 428Charlottesville,VA USA |
I believe it's a little piece of God Himself planted in our soul. With out it we feel and know nothing! JMHO...;-) Good question! Kitty |
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serenity blaze Member Empyrean
since 2000-02-02
Posts 27738 |
sigh. I shall consult the cards. Just a sec. Hmmm. Well that was depressing and a tad too personal at that. I'll let ya know when I find it, ethel. But for the life of me, I dunno why you are asking, smile--YOU seem to have found the answer!  |
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Bill Charles Member Patricius
since 2000-07-11
Posts 10619highways, & byways, for now |
garysgirl - all of this and more... BC |
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garysgirl
since 2002-09-29
Posts 19237Florida, USA |
Heather, the last parts of the poem are what I personally think "real and un-dying" love is...  "Love makes the world go around" |
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garysgirl
since 2002-09-29
Posts 19237Florida, USA |
Thank you, Ken. I'm glad you liked it. BTW, after all the many mistakes I've made in love relationships, I have learned that even though there is chemistry to start with, the flame has to be kept alive for the relationship to last. I believe that can be accomplished by doing the last parts of the poem. But, bothe parties have to want it to work and have to be dedicated to each other to keep the passion alive.... Thanks for your comments, and I like the poem in your reply.... "Love makes the world go around" |
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garysgirl
since 2002-09-29
Posts 19237Florida, USA |
A Tone Of Voice...  Hi, I haven't seen you for a while..Glad to see you here. Yeah, I think it takes a combination of all the things I wrote........ Thanks for reading and replying..... "Love makes the world go around" |
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garysgirl
since 2002-09-29
Posts 19237Florida, USA |
Thank you, Pat. I appreciate you reading and replying... "Love makes the world go around" |
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garysgirl
since 2002-09-29
Posts 19237Florida, USA |
That's right, Kitty. With God's help, love can be real and eternal...... He can put the determination and dedication in the hearts of one to make it work.... "Love makes the world go around" |
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garysgirl
since 2002-09-29
Posts 19237Florida, USA |
Karen, I wrote this because of some replies I read on other post. I do believe that after all these years, and all the mistakes in relationships, that I have finally found the answer.... I believe that no matter how much a couple love each other, it will not last eternally, or be a Forever Love, unless both parties really work at it. One dedicated person can't make the love stay alive. It takes both and they do have to begin with a Real love, before it will grow...... "Love makes the world go around" |
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garysgirl
since 2002-09-29
Posts 19237Florida, USA |
Yes Bill, I believe the same as you... "Love makes the world go around" |
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Aenimal Member Rara Avis
since 2002-11-18
Posts 7350the ass-end of space |
It is what you let it be, as soon as you try to control understand or define it it is marred |
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Mistletoe Angel
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
 (tears fall down my cheeks) Oh Ethel, I wish for this love ever so much, and I thought I had it but Joanna said she never even loved me which I know was a lie! (wipes tears) She even said someone of her own for so long and now I'm sad that it will be so long before I ever find a girl who truly feels for me like I feel for her and doesn't hide hypocritical facts in the attic of her mind! (sad sigh) I wish for this love in your heart to be true and to last forever, sweet friend, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Ethel, thank you for sharing! May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton "Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..." |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
I still have yet to find this...not worried though...it will come I guess. |
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