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VAS
Member Rara Avis
since 2000-11-16
Posts 7450
Oregon

0 posted 2003-01-24 02:02 PM



Pantoum Cartoon

                             There stood this crazy feline
                             that went out to the mall
                             her main intent to dine
                             when she heard a tomcat’s call,

                             that went out to the mall
                             with ardor in his hips.
                             When she heard a tomcat’s call,
                             purrs burst from her sweet lips

                             With ardor in his hips,
                             equipped with lascivious grins. . .
                             Purrs burst from her sweet lips
                             as she sidled tuna tins.

                             Equipped with lascivious grins,
                             her main intent to dine,
                             as she sidled tuna tins
                             there stood this crazy feline.

         ©January 24, 2003

Whether on the shoal or on the shore,
I'll seek the lighthouse evermore.

© Copyright 2003 Virginia Salter - All Rights Reserved
passing shadows
Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577
displaced
1 posted 2003-01-24 02:05 PM


reminds me of a Shel Silverstein piece of mind
Kethry
Member Rara Avis
since 2000-07-29
Posts 9082
Victoria Australia
2 posted 2003-01-25 04:07 PM


VAS,
ah cupboard love, who can beat it.
Kethry

Here in the midst of my lonely abyss, a single joy I find...your presence in my mind.  Unknown



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