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Krawdad
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0 posted 2003-01-08 03:24 PM


Day of Gloom


On a day of gloom
with errors made
no flowers bloom
in sunshine’s fade

But be it mist
or full blown rain
remember this
as my refrain

It is my wish
so very plain
to feel your kiss
without explain





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1slick_lady
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standing on a shadow's lace
1 posted 2003-01-08 03:25 PM


SMOOCH

Enchantress
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Canada eh.
2 posted 2003-01-08 04:24 PM


....Excellent!

serenity blaze
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3 posted 2003-01-08 04:26 PM



Cpat Hair
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4 posted 2003-01-08 04:30 PM


Ah K..I didn't know you felt that way about me... come here bud... I'll give you a smooch... ( chuckling)


garysgirl
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5 posted 2003-01-08 04:36 PM




There!!!

Krawdad
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6 posted 2003-01-08 05:22 PM


THANKS . . . I NEEDED THAT !!!

ya'll are improvin on my really grumpy day


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7 posted 2003-01-08 06:12 PM


awwww like it a lot

Charisma

regards2you
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8 posted 2003-01-08 10:16 PM




Great poem.  But, you've got a line-up, downright promiscuous! How about a hug, instead. Smiling here, enjoyed!


Hugs, Pat

..without surrender, be on good terms with all persons..
        "Desiderata"

passing shadows
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displaced
9 posted 2003-01-10 02:00 AM


nice...very nice...
Toerag
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10 posted 2003-01-10 07:26 AM


Grumpy day?...Let me tell you about my day!!,,,Naw, never mind...why ruin everyone's day...LOL.....great write K'dad...hope your day gets better, and I hope mine does also....
SmartChick
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11 posted 2003-01-10 07:47 AM


Nice poem!
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