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0 posted 2003-01-08 02:35 PM



  

    ~~~~~~~~~

  I was teetering
   on the brink
     of forgetfulness
       Until you swept me
          off my feet
              and
               I was kidnapped
                   by love's recall

                     ~~~~~~~~~~~

                                 Chris B.
                                ~~~~~~~~~

© Copyright 2003 Chris Barker - All Rights Reserved
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1 posted 2003-01-08 02:38 PM



Reposts...
a wonderful warm
to a cool day...

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2 posted 2003-01-08 02:40 PM


Lovely...I love reposts...
especially beautiful ones like this!
~Hugs, Luv & Miss ya, Teed~

~Time has cast a spell on you,
  So you won't ever forget me~

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3 posted 2003-01-08 02:49 PM


Karilea - I am glad it warmed your day.

Nancylee - My muse!! My muse!! My kingdom for my muse!! Thanks for signing Teed. Miss ya too. Hugs.

"Hope" is the thing with feathers-
that perches in the soul....
                  
                       -Emily Dickinson

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4 posted 2003-01-08 04:26 PM


Well, I'm sure happy to see this one reposted, it's so pretty   

The stars will shine when I am gone,
the earth will turn on as before,
the gulls, still race along the shore,
the morning star, still kiss the dawn

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5 posted 2003-01-08 04:28 PM


Thankyou dear Michael.

"Hope" is the thing with feathers-
that perches in the soul....
                  
                       -Emily Dickinson

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6 posted 2003-01-08 04:29 PM


I too, have been recalling love lately.

I loved the sweeping form of this. (But rumor has it that I am partial to brooms, yanno )

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7 posted 2003-01-08 04:31 PM


Chris, I sure am glad that you reposted this. It is really pretty. I love it.....  

"Love makes the world go around"
~~with love and hugs from Ethel~~  
                  

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8 posted 2003-01-08 04:34 PM


serenity - Thankyou for reading and commenting.

Ethel - I am glad you enjoyed - thankyou.

"Hope" is the thing with feathers-
that perches in the soul....
                  
                       -Emily Dickinson

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9 posted 2003-01-08 05:26 PM


Chris, you made my day with this repost. Thanks hon ... Marti
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10 posted 2003-01-08 06:22 PM


Marti - what a nice thing to say! thankyou so much.

"Hope" is the thing with feathers-
that perches in the soul....
                  
                       -Emily Dickinson

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11 posted 2003-01-09 03:48 AM




(tears fall down my cheeks) Oh Chris, thank you so much for re-posting this, I have been heartbroken since New Years and this poem made me feel maybe I may feel true love before I die and I may find this serendipity of my own! (sad sigh) You are a very special friend to me, sweet friend, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Chris, thank you for sharing!



May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

"Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..."

Shakira

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12 posted 2003-01-09 09:06 AM


Sometimes when one might feel that they have been forgotten by the one they love...out of the blue, a thought, an action arrives and they realize that they are still loved. Thanks for sharing.
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13 posted 2003-01-09 09:16 AM


Chris,
Well done, enjoyed.

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14 posted 2003-01-09 10:11 AM


Nightshade, I do believe your muse is on the brink of returning to inspire you...

believe in what your heart feels...

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15 posted 2003-01-09 04:52 PM


Noah, oh sweetie, you will find true love, or it will find you, when you least expect it. Thankyou.

Opeth - Yes, you are certainly correct there! Thankyou for your comments.

Seymour - thankyou sir for reading and commenting.

scorpio - oh, I do hope she is....I really want to write something, but the words just won't come. Thankyou.

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16 posted 2003-01-10 04:25 AM


good one...got me thinking!
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17 posted 2003-01-10 09:42 AM


passing shadows - glad you enjoyed!

"Hope" is the thing with feathers-
that perches in the soul....
                  
                       -Emily Dickinson

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