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1slick_lady
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standing on a shadow's lace

0 posted 2003-01-08 02:33 PM


Almost Ready

my time
in stone jail
finds tired heart
almost ready
for a little joy
where twinkle
in eyes
are not tears


"It is like looking for a blizzard in a glass snowball. Unless you shake it up not one flake will fly."


© Copyright 2003 Helen Chambers - All Rights Reserved
serenity blaze
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1 posted 2003-01-08 02:38 PM


smiling, as you know, I too, wait for the day the gate is left unlatched.

you write much with few words.

Salty
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2 posted 2003-01-08 02:45 PM


OH yeah....really enjoyed and can identify... BIG TIME!!


Great write


~Salty

In the Midst of movement and chaos, keep stillness inside of you.
--Deepak Chop

passing shadows
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displaced
3 posted 2003-01-08 02:46 PM


nice...can relate well
Enchantress
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4 posted 2003-01-08 02:47 PM


Heh heh....love this Helen!
~Hugs & Smiles~

~Time has cast a spell on you,
  So you won't ever forget me~

Cpat Hair
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5 posted 2003-01-08 02:59 PM


not even stone can hold forever... very nicely done my friend...
garysgirl
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6 posted 2003-01-08 03:16 PM


Yes, Helen, you did say a lot in a few words...  

"Love makes the world go around"
~~with love and hugs from Ethel~~  
                  

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