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vandana
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0 posted 2003-01-08 10:49 AM



If only
All through the years
I have ever loved you
I always wanted you
If only
You would see
My feelings for you are real
Belive what I say
If only
You would see
If only
You see how true my love Is
If only
You see through
my heart
Feel the same
As I feel for you
You would understand me
That Iam only one for you
If only

[This message has been edited by vandana (01-08-2003 10:58 AM).]

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regards2you
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1 posted 2003-01-08 12:06 PM


Vandana,

Much heartfelt wistfulness in this....
certainly hoped it worked out...glad for the repost, captures feelings nicely.

yes,  ~if only~......many have been there...

Hugs and warm regards, Pat

..without surrender, be on good terms with all persons..
        "Desiderata"

garysgirl
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2 posted 2003-01-08 12:23 PM


Vandan, I liked your poem. I hope that all is good. Thanks for reposting, too....  

"Love makes the world go around"
~~with love and hugs from Ethel~~  
                  

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3 posted 2003-01-08 12:43 PM


just beautiful...*smile*
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4 posted 2003-01-09 03:59 AM




(big hugggsssssssss) Oh Vandana, I know just how you feel, I thought I had it all but it was all just living a lie and I pray everything you feel is real love! (sigh) My thoughts are with you, sweet friend, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Vandana, thank you for sharing!



May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

"Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..."

Shakira

vandana
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5 posted 2003-01-09 04:33 PM


THANK YOU FOR READING THIS.VANDANA
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