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BloomingRose
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0 posted 2003-01-08 08:00 AM



Blame It On The Moon
~*~

When I’m standing all alone
looking at the moon

feelingblue

wishing your lips
were next to mine

I know-

it has to be you



BloomingRose

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Toerag
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1 posted 2003-01-08 08:02 AM


It is me...honest! It is, it really is..okay?....Where do ya wanna meet?....Cute write sweetie...
Sunshine
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2 posted 2003-02-02 09:30 AM



Toe can take a tender moment
and stand it on it's head...

back to the top with you!

Midnitesun
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3 posted 2003-02-02 10:38 AM


Smiling at this one.
LOL at the moon tune as viewed by the perennial stubbed Toe.

Ericc
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4 posted 2003-02-02 03:46 PM


Oh...wow!
This is lovely.
Eric

Enchantress
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5 posted 2003-02-02 03:48 PM


Very nice Deb!
How lovely and romantic!
~Hugs & Smiles, Nancy~

~Time has cast a spell on you,
  So you won't ever forget me~

Mistletoe Angel
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6 posted 2003-02-02 05:13 PM




(smiles) This is so gorgeous, sweet friend, such a lovely tranquil feel touches these words, I love it, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Debra, thank you for sharing!



May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

"Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..."

Shakira

Bill Charles
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7 posted 2003-02-02 05:15 PM


BloomingRose - the moon is very magical, I love it, and to read about it in this write...

BC

garysgirl
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8 posted 2003-02-02 05:41 PM


This is really pretty, Debra. Sorry I missed it before. I'm glad it got on the front so I could see it.

"Love makes the world go around"
~~with love and hugs from Ethel~~  
                  

passing shadows
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9 posted 2003-02-03 01:35 AM


wish I could be this sure
vlraynes
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10 posted 2003-02-04 01:30 AM



Deb~
Your writing always makes me smile.
I love this.
Good to see you again.
Hugs,
~Vicky

"...until you have read the verse on his heart,
you have not truly met the poet.
~vlraynes

GG
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11 posted 2003-02-04 01:32 AM


this is quite beautiful
Enjoyed!
Always, Alyssa

- And so it was that time stood still -
     (blink, breathe, stand, fight)

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