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inkedgoddess
Member Rara Avis

since 2002-11-19

Posts 7392
Ohio

0 posted 2003-01-08 07:16 AM

grey birds
assemble
on snowbleached
rooftops,
rest a few
and wait with me,
for yellow flowers
to come,
soon scatter off,
blend into the
bare winter sky,
leaving me
to myself,
with these
endless
thoughts

[This message has been edited by inkedgoddess (01-08-2003 07:18 AM).]

Toerag
Member Ascendant

since 1999-07-29

Posts 5622
Ala bam a

1 posted 2003-01-08 08:27 AM

And they usually fly over me and leave me a reminder to get out of the way next time...a very descriptive write sweetie...

secretlife
Member

since 2002-07-30

Posts 359
Grean Earth ,,,

2 posted 2003-01-08 10:40 AM

This is very nice..

Keep writing....

Hugesssss

garysgirl

Member Laureate

since 2002-09-29

Posts 19237
Florida, USA

3 posted 2003-01-08 10:56 AM

inkedgoddesss,
sometimes those endless thoughts just won't go away,
will they?

(me laughing at Toerag's reply........)

"Love makes the world go around"
~~with love and hugs from Ethel~~

SmartChick
Member Rara Avis

since 2001-09-23

Posts 7081
On A Journey To The Unknown

4 posted 2003-01-08 11:05 AM

Those thoughts never do seem to end. My mind is filled with a lot of them.

Nan

Administrator

Member Seraphic

since 1999-05-20

Posts 21191
Cape Cod Massachusetts USA

5 posted 2003-01-08 11:31 AM

In hopes of an early spring... I enjoyed this..

serenity blaze
Member Empyrean

since 2000-02-02

Posts 27738

6 posted 2003-01-08 08:32 PM

I love poems that have that "alone with my thoughts" quality...

This reverberates, m.

Aenimal
Member Rara Avis

since 2002-11-18

Posts 7350
the ass-end of space

7 posted 2003-01-09 02:28 AM

Don't get caught up to deeply in those thoughts is all i can offer

PoetryIsLife

Senior Member

since 2001-10-27

Posts 1763
...in my boxers...

8 posted 2003-01-09 03:28 AM

All I have to say is nicely done.

~Titus

"A life unexamined is not worth living."
-Socrates

passing shadows
Member Empyrean

since 1999-08-26

Posts 45577
displaced

9 posted 2003-01-09 04:01 AM

I know it too

bklynboy
Senior Member

since 2002-12-15

Posts 660
florida

10 posted 2003-01-09 07:22 AM

Sometimes thinking to much is not a good thing. Occasionally you need to go with the flow.

Charisma

Member Ascendant

since 2000-09-30

Posts 5906
lost in blue pages

11 posted 2003-01-09 08:39 AM

nicely done!

Charisma

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