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gemjop
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0 posted 2003-01-07 07:28 PM



Goosebumps dance over heart too small
to fit in all i feel
as i tip toe over memories of you
picking out my most cherished blooms.

Confessions i can never keep
singing in between masterful trees
their branches nod in affirmation
I cannot contain the effortless feeling.

Every changing pace of breeze
consults my balance
I follow your tracks
they circle back to me.

I'll follow you forever
if you
forever follow me.

learning each day, for you and i, our paths have met, i've already learnt that you are love.

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garysgirl
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1 posted 2003-01-07 11:40 PM


I love this, Gemma. It's so pretty......

"Love makes the world go around"
~~with love and hugs from Ethel~~  
                  

Mistletoe Angel
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2 posted 2003-01-08 04:06 AM




(sigh) This is so lovely, sweet friend, I too love he thought of being followed but following at the same time! (kiss on cheek) This is heartfelt, sweet friend, this made me cry, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Gemma, thank you for sharing!



May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton


"Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..."

Shakira

[This message has been edited by Mistletoe Angel (01-08-2003 04:06 AM).]

passing shadows
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3 posted 2003-01-08 04:06 AM


wow!
Sandpiper
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4 posted 2003-01-08 06:04 AM


soft..oh so soft and lovely!

"And it was at that age...Poetry arrived in search of me...And something started in my soul."
Pablo Neruda

Charisma
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5 posted 2003-01-08 07:16 AM


Nicely done!

Charisma

regards2you
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6 posted 2003-01-08 08:10 AM



Gem, such a circle of love....

Wonderfully written, enjoyed much!
Hugs,  Pat

..without surrender, be on good terms with all persons..
        "Desiderata"

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