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Susan Caldwell
Member Rara Avis

since 2002-12-27

Posts 8348
Florida

0 posted 2003-01-07 02:52 PM

Lonliness (01/01/03)

I would write my misery in a song
But contrary to the cliché, there is no one to sing along
I wear my sorrow alone
A blanket of solitude I don
Freedom has cost me company
There’s no one to comfort me

I know it takes time for wounds to heal
And I know someday I will once again feel
But the loneliness is holding me down
I’m not sure “happily ever after” can be found

I ache to be loved for mind, body and soul
I cry silent tears to be touched until my heart is again full

So here I sit
Penning my desolation in word
Hoping this time I might be heard

Cpat Hair

Member Patricius

since 2001-06-05

Posts 11793

1 posted 2003-01-07 02:53 PM

loneliness is not much of a friend...and certainly a cold companion... your words are heard by all that have felt it and experienced it....

regards2you
Member Elite

since 2002-10-01

Posts 3940
California

2 posted 2003-01-07 03:07 PM

So true, and you captured lonliness so well. May all your dreams come true.

Hugs, Pat

..without surrender, be on good terms with all persons..
"Desiderata"

Enchantress
Member Empyrean

since 2001-08-14

Posts 35113
Canada eh.

3 posted 2003-01-07 03:18 PM

You have managed to perfectly pen your feelings here.
~Hugs & Smiles, Nancy~

~Time has cast a spell on you,
So you won't ever forget me~

Ethan Halo
Senior Member

since 2000-04-28

Posts 793
on the roof again

4 posted 2003-01-07 05:21 PM

you've been heard..
and you're not singing alone. trust me.

hope the writing helps. if not, send us an email.
we're always happy to help out and lend a friendly ear.

New Year's Resolution #1: Cultivate a less vindictive cricle of enemies.

S Arthur Grey
Senior Member

since 2001-03-19

Posts 719
woven by a poet's loom

5 posted 2003-01-07 05:54 PM

misery's song
here echoes long
voices pleading
answers needing
in canyon's each
we sit, beseech

vandana

Member Patricius

since 1999-10-22

Posts 10463
USA

6 posted 2003-01-07 06:07 PM

enjoyed

Bohemianaus
Member

since 2003-01-05

Posts 69
Australia (South Gippsland)

7 posted 2003-01-07 06:58 PM

Perfectly captured - i was listening to some Garry Moore as I was reading this and coincidentally the song that was playing was "Stiil got the blues for you" - the music seemed to provide a poignant bed for the reading. Look forward to reading more.

God bless and keep you, Namaste!
Boh

[This message has been edited by Bohemianaus (01-07-2003 07:03 PM).]

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