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quik
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since 2002-11-27
Posts 91
Dinwiddie,Virginia

0 posted 2003-01-07 01:49 PM


When you say you love me,
Then the tingle starts,
Could this feeling be any deeper,
Than where it is in my heart?

When you say you love me,
Then I feel the rush,
I'm filled with something so big,
It feels like I could bust.

When you say you love me,
I say it back to you,
After all it's only right,
That you feel what I feel too.

So when you say you love me,
Think of how I feel.
For when I say it back I know,
Our love is very real.

W

© Copyright 2003 Antonio Duran Weary - All Rights Reserved
garysgirl
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since 2002-09-29
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1 posted 2003-01-07 02:02 PM


Oh, yes, Antonio......those are three VERY important words.
To love and be loved back in return is one of the best feelings in the world...  

"Love makes the world go around"
~~with love and hugs from Ethel~~  
                  

Salty
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since 2002-11-23
Posts 669
Texas
2 posted 2003-01-07 02:04 PM


Very Well Said !!!!

~Salty

In the Midst of movement and chaos, keep stillness inside of you.
--Deepak Chop

regards2you
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since 2002-10-01
Posts 3940
California
3 posted 2003-01-07 03:13 PM


Sweet and precious. Enjoyed.


Hugs, Pat

..without surrender, be on good terms with all persons..
        "Desiderata"

scorpio
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since 2002-10-02
Posts 5178
right...there
4 posted 2003-01-07 04:02 PM


Beauitiful...glad you get to hear that wonderful phrase repeated when you say it first..

believe in what your heart feels...

JamesMichael
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since 1999-11-16
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Kapolei, Hawaii, USA
5 posted 2003-04-23 06:22 PM


Enjoyed...James
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