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WhiteRose
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since 2002-07-23
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somebody's dungeon

0 posted 2003-01-07 01:22 PM



With jagged edge
   instead
of perfect puzzle fit,

the picture
   a misprint,

double exposed
  blurred vision of rose.

Scraping against self...

   the portrait,  

pained in birth
the pose unrehearsed,

only photogenic
  in the capture
    of emotion.

WhiteRose 1/07/03

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Professor Gloom
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since 2000-07-23
Posts 3082
of Depression
1 posted 2003-01-07 01:30 PM


But the photogenic things are of emotional nature,
Many examples leap to mind,
But I won’t spoil your poem with my images,
Enjoyed

Gloom

S Arthur Grey
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since 2001-03-19
Posts 719
woven by a poet's loom
2 posted 2003-01-07 01:36 PM


misprint?
perhaps
but i think instead
her lens
was never focused
and i remained
forever
undefined

CSKpoet
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since 2002-07-12
Posts 845
Island in Paradise
3 posted 2003-01-07 11:46 PM


Very thoughtful and well done..and
I love your new picture too, pretty lady!
Happy New Year!
Cher

Poetry is:
Passion, imagination and intellect running together.

Aloha with warmest regards, Cheryl Stewart Koomoa

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