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quik
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0 posted 2003-01-07 11:22 AM


I can't forget the pain somehow,
though the house is somewhat empty now
How selfish you must think I be,
to think you better here with me
Your pain was bad in every way,
but I feel pain now everyday
I lost a friend but so much more,
of what I know I wish before
Your gone forever you could not stay,
I wish for you just one more day
My love of you it did run deep,
and as I go I start to weep
My tears of now they hold such pain,
they'll consist forever just like the rain
For you to see another day,
my time here would hold less gray
And to my dear I write this for him to know,
My dearest friend he had to go

© Copyright 2003 Antonio Duran Weary - All Rights Reserved
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1 posted 2003-01-07 12:34 PM


Antonio, it's good to see you here on these pages of blue again......

this is a beautiful poem, but so sad....  

"Love makes the world go around"
~~with love and hugs from Ethel~~  
                  

passing shadows
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displaced
2 posted 2003-01-07 12:49 PM


I hope this pain here will ease.
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