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rainman
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since 2002-12-14
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0 posted 2003-01-07 11:09 AM



The Love Letter

When i stare at the sea
i recognize a picture
in the horizon

blue of it
reminds me of you
your beauty embracing
the darkness of night

indefinite is the picture
like my fate
is it flue
but is always the same that
i love you...



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passing shadows
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1 posted 2003-01-07 12:59 PM


wow! I can see it when I close my eyes. *smile*
garysgirl
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2 posted 2003-01-07 01:06 PM


This is beautiful....

"Love makes the world go around"
~~with love and hugs from Ethel~~  
                  

Salty
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since 2002-11-23
Posts 669
Texas
3 posted 2003-01-07 01:30 PM


mmmm you sound a little love sick
Not a bad sickness at all.  
Nicely done


~Salty

In the Midst of movement and chaos, keep stillness inside of you.
--Deepak Chop

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