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WhiteRose
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somebody's dungeon

0 posted 2003-01-07 10:07 AM



Too many of me
   spread haphazardly
in life happily
   I'm smiling you see...

Artistic display
  too much yesterday
the color array
  blends with today...

A collection of prints
that don't really fit
with the mood I emit..

Lacking, I admit
in reality, finality,
for the picture, it changes,
the order, rearranges
mixing, remixing,
as the story unfolds
in the pictures it's told.

WhiteRose 1/07/03

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Midnitesun
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Gaia
1 posted 2003-01-07 10:10 AM


Nice picture!
Changes are natural. I guess we just have to accept that some of the pics aren't as we planned. Enjoyed this, WhiteRose.

Cpat Hair
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2 posted 2003-01-07 03:11 PM


ah the images shift as do the days...
nice work..enjoyed the juxtoposition of motion on the images...

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