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gemjop
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0 posted 2003-01-07 08:27 AM



In my life,
I'll read your ambitions,
upon proud paper,
mind will tremble,
at the print.
Hidden atmospheres you open,
with the words you play,
derived from sleepless nights.
My geocentric vision,
sees from the center,
not to hinder,
but revel,
in this dedication.
Your dreams,
are as important to me,
as mine.

learning each day, for you and i, our paths have met, i've already learnt that you are love.

© Copyright 2003 gj - All Rights Reserved
Midnitesun
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Gaia
1 posted 2003-01-07 08:31 AM


Outstanding!
My dreams are sometimes totally insane!
But they are mine, so that makes them special, right?  

Seymour Tabin
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2 posted 2003-01-07 08:35 AM


gemjop
A beautiful thought, thank you.

regards2you
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3 posted 2003-01-07 11:09 AM




Ah, how beautiful the thought!
Hugs, Pat

..without surrender, be on good terms with all persons..
        "Desiderata"

ctowen
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4 posted 2003-01-07 11:26 AM


A beautiful statement, its amazing how any two people can share similar dreams and never physically meet each other ...
... that's the soul for you.  

garysgirl
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5 posted 2003-01-07 11:34 AM


Gemma, this is so beautiful...the thought and the poem.
You are such a special person, friend, with such a big heart.
I feel the same way, another's dreams shouln't be put down or made fun of,
but respected, cherished and encouraged,
just as if they're our own dreams.
Thanks for this,dear friend....

"Love makes the world go around"
~~with love and hugs from Ethel~~  
                  

[This message has been edited by garysgirl (01-07-2003 11:35 AM).]

kaile
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6 posted 2003-01-07 12:46 PM


My geocentric vision,
sees from the center,
not to hinder,
but revel,
in this dedication.

a very thoughtful and thought-provoking statement..

passing shadows
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7 posted 2003-01-07 12:47 PM


beautiful and kind-hearted thoughts
gemjop
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8 posted 2003-01-07 01:12 PM


thankyou all for your replies. i think its important to let those you love know that they are free to pursue their dreams. i've known people who have been made to give up on their ambitions due to someone around them. and their pain is often immense and hugely bitter.
i love it here, because we share our dreams openly, and every thought that is written here,by each of you,teaches me something different every day.
This place has a really unique feeling to it.
and is very important to me.
sorry for getting all emotional! ha ha.
so thanks to you all.

learning each day, for you and i, our paths have met, i've already learnt that you are love.

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