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jytree
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0 posted 2003-01-07 04:11 AM



Your love was great,
The sacriface was true,
And all my heart poured out as I loved you,

So now we stand,
Alittle different this time,
Our hearts have changed,
And so we said our goodbyes,

So now with all of these tears in my eyes,
We both know that surely of love flame has died,
I know that the flame lives in our heart,
But mine quit beating now that we are apart,

The flame has died swollowed by the dark,
Now nothing not even a spark,
For when my flame died my heart did to,
My heart died from the loss of you,

So now as we stand trying to make sense of it all,
We know that the flame has died,
And my back is aganist the wall,

So now if you ask will I love again,
Well that is another time another place my friend

© Copyright 2003 Michael Jay vaughn - All Rights Reserved
JamesMichael
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1 posted 2003-01-07 04:27 AM


Yes that is another time and another place...James
Kethry
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2 posted 2003-01-07 06:56 AM


Always room for another time and place.
Kethry

Here in the midst of my lonely abyss, a single joy I find...your presence in my mind.  Unknown



Greeneyes617
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3 posted 2003-01-07 12:57 PM


This was pretty good. I can feel how you felt when you wrote this. Course, that could be because I know you so well. Good write.
passing shadows
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4 posted 2003-01-07 01:00 PM




love the ending...wonderfully sad piece

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5 posted 2003-01-07 01:00 PM


This is a good poem with lots of emotions felt from it....

"Love makes the world go around"
~~with love and hugs from Ethel~~  
                  

jytree
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6 posted 2003-01-07 03:10 PM


yea I was just writing to my ex when I started this I am glad you liked it
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