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Masked Intruder
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Senior Member
since 1999-05-23
Posts 1231Near golden sunsets 
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Frozen in fickle silence, a switch that comes and goes, I struggle with words that would empty my heart but instead belie mangled prose. Undying love is killing me slowly sick fate separates us more each day but I stare through tear stained eyes, fearing to blink would take you away. |
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serenity blaze Member Empyrean
since 2000-02-02
Posts 27738 |
reads like a horrible suffocation via dry cleaner bag. OH. I meant that as a compliment. But hugs for the emotion, apparent. (pppssssst....thank you for the christmas wishes!  ) |
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Nan
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-05-20
Posts 21191Cape Cod Massachusetts USA |
If others would only live by OUR expectations, life would be easier, wouldn't it? Nice write, MI..Nice to see your work (I should talk?)...  |
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Midnitesun
since 2001-05-18
Posts 28647Gaia |
ouch... Breathe deeply, and write more. |
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regards2you Member Elite
since 2002-10-01
Posts 3940California |
I like this. It is scary to empty our hearts when........ warm regards, Pat ..without surrender, be on good terms with all persons.. |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
Just awesome Philip! |
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garysgirl
since 2002-09-29
Posts 19237Florida, USA |
Philip, I like your poetry and would certainly like to see more of it here on these pages of blue......  "Love makes the world go around" |
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S Arthur Grey Senior Member
since 2001-03-19
Posts 719woven by a poet's loom |
"fickle silence" "sick fate" what to do??? |
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