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Aenimal
Member Rara Avis

since 2002-11-18

Posts 7350
the ass-end of space

0 posted 2003-01-06 10:08 PM

One note and I'm gone
melting in aural landscapes
voice of an angel

serenity blaze
Member Empyrean

since 2000-02-02

Posts 27738

1 posted 2003-01-06 10:21 PM

forgive my ignororance regarding the title, but this just reminded me, there is an Italian term, (generally applied to opera) wherein a listener is transported to physical orgasm just by virtue of being graced by unbelievable artistry.

This reminded me of that. Just wish I could remember the damned term...sigh..

(and hey? grin? "orgasm by virtue?")

I challenge you, (

) Raph.

you are inspiring m'friend.

Aenimal
Member Rara Avis

since 2002-11-18

Posts 7350
the ass-end of space

2 posted 2003-01-06 10:32 PM

I accept your challenge

I have no idea what the term is but can understand the feeling. As for the title I didn't want this to be a gushing fan piece or a full blown tribute. Just a simple acknowledgement of a brilliant artist and soul who touched me with her music.

inkedgoddess
Member Rara Avis

since 2002-11-19

Posts 7392
Ohio

3 posted 2003-01-06 10:54 PM

oral landscapes?
like a note on your flute?
anyhow, glad youre seeing some sunshine in the rain

Sunshine

Administrator

Member Empyrean

since 1999-06-25

Posts 63354
Listening to every heart

4 posted 2003-01-07 09:12 AM

When voice blends to word
strand of whisper melting soul
magic meets poet

Midnitesun

Member Empyrean

since 2001-05-18

Posts 28647
Gaia

5 posted 2003-01-07 09:28 AM

Influenced Mind?

VAS
Member Rara Avis

since 2000-11-16

Posts 7450
Oregon

6 posted 2003-01-07 09:31 AM

extremely vivid, or would it be aural senyru...don't know for whom the initials stand, though, but understand your adoration

Whether on the shoal or on the shore,
I'll seek the lighthouse evermore.

regards2you
Member Elite

since 2002-10-01

Posts 3940
California

7 posted 2003-01-07 10:03 AM

Liked this much. I've felt this way.
Even some instrumental light jazz can cause the same feelings.
Hugs, Pat

..without surrender, be on good terms with all persons..
"Desiderata"

kaile

Member Ascendant

since 2000-02-06

Posts 5146
singapore

8 posted 2003-01-07 10:41 AM

Aenimal,
i'm a fan of haiku and senryu and though i don't comment to all your efforts, so far, i have liked what i read...well done!

Aenimal
Member Rara Avis

since 2002-11-18

Posts 7350
the ass-end of space

9 posted 2003-01-07 03:39 PM

thanks inked but for once my head in that gutter though that music is just as sweet

Sunshine thanks for adding those beautiful words

No no Midnite, this was totally a natural escape

Thank you VAS I would have mentioned her name but didn't want it to be a fluffy dedication piece. I do adore her though she's brilliant.

Pat all music for me, there's different types for different moods

Kaile very kind words thank you very much, I appreciate your reading my work

garysgirl

Member Laureate

since 2002-09-29

Posts 19237
Florida, USA

10 posted 2003-01-07 03:42 PM

Raph, this whole verse is very good. I love writing these
so much. I'm gpoing to start doing them again, just because I want to.......

"Love makes the world go around"
~~with love and hugs from Ethel~~

Aenimal
Member Rara Avis

since 2002-11-18

Posts 7350
the ass-end of space

11 posted 2003-01-07 04:02 PM

Thanks Ethel they're a fun way to keep the created juices flowing aren't they?

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