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undesired New Member
since 2003-01-06
Posts 1 |
Alone Again Alone again, it isn't a surprise, I am left alone what a demise. All I got is friends, but I still fill so alone, Wishing my day was over so I could go home. I want to sleep forever, don't wake me up please, God don't make me pray again, on my knees. Why should I have to ask when he knows my thoughts? Why is it when my life is going good, he makes it flop? How can I suck the marrow out of life when I always feel down? When I'm around you I have to hide my frown. I don't want you to feel sad because of something like me, I just want you to know how I feel, cant you see? I'm only relieved when you give me a hug, You tell me it's ok, you'll find someone you love. It's a little unclear how you let your dad stand in the way. But I have no word, so I just go on with the day. Maybe you found a better guy who is better looking and sweet. Someone who makes your body tingle all the way to your feet. Something I could never do. I wish that wasn't true. But we are friends and that's probably all we will ever be. Guess I better start looking for my unknown girl again, wonder who will she be? |
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Sunshine
Administrator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
Welcome to Passions! Please, check your E-mail for a Special Greeting! Karilea |
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Magnus
since 2001-10-10
Posts 14135South Carolina, USA |
Hang in there...it ain't over till the old woman sings.... Welcome to Passions...enjoy your stay and continue to write... |
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Denise
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-08-22
Posts 22648 |
Ooops! Check your email for 2 Special Greetings! Very sad poem, Undesired. |
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Nightshade
since 2001-08-31
Posts 13962just out of reach |
 Enjoyed your first post!! Chris "Hope" is the thing with feathers- |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
WELCOME TO PASSIONS! Very sad first post. Hope things get better for you. I shall be watching for more of your work. ~Hugs & Smiles, Nancy~ ~Time has cast a spell on you, |
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Dragon Mistress Member
since 2002-08-26
Posts 289Washington, USA. |
aww, very sad, but very sweet. -Tanya Dragon Mistress ~*~I'm only a dreamer, with broken dreams, and only words to fall back on~*~ |
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PoeTik JusTice Member
since 2003-01-05
Posts 186California, USA |
Good first post! Welcome! I'm new to passions too! Nice poem.  XoXo Love Alwayz XoXo |
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Bohemianaus Member
since 2003-01-05
Posts 69Australia (South Gippsland) |
Welcome to passions - i'm a newbie too - i'm enjoying the site - hope you will too. Boh |
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Mistletoe Angel
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
  (big hugggssssssss) I understand just wnhat you mean and I feel myself asking those exact same questions feeling the hypocrisy of love just last New Years Day! This is a powerful debut, sweet friend, I love it! Welcome to Passions, sweet friend, may you be inspired by all of us here as we will all be inspired by your lovely words! I can't wait to read more of your lovely words, sweet friend, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet friend, thank you for sharing!   May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton "Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..." |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
good first post! Welcome to Passions! Hope to read more of you! |
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Kethry Member Rara Avis
since 2000-07-29
Posts 9082Victoria Australia |
Welcome to passions. heartwrenching write. Kethry Here in the midst of my lonely abyss, a single joy I find...your presence in my mind. Unknown |
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Gentle Spirit Member Patricius
since 2000-10-09
Posts 13989 |
A very emotional and powerful first post. Welcome to Passions! Enjoyed your verse very much. |
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scorpio Member Ascendant
since 2002-10-02
Posts 5178right...there |
believe in what your heart feels... |
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Midnitesun
since 2001-05-18
Posts 28647Gaia |
WELCOME! Maybe you can shake off the blues by writing and posting here in the blues? Don't forget to check out all the other forums, there is much variety here at Pips.  |
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