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hannah44
Junior Member
since 2003-01-05
Posts 11


0 posted 2003-01-06 03:59 PM



Smells like you
Coming down the stair
I can tell before you're here
you want to smell roses
I can't offer roses.
Only oranges
Citrus irritates you.
Sour, stinging, biting
Seems to fit you.
But you have
other ideas.
You want the
delecate pearl
I just can't be.
A trophy?
Maybe, Indicisive you.
When I'm left alone
you wouldn't know me
Only then
do I smell
of gasoline.



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scorpio
Member Ascendant
since 2002-10-02
Posts 5178
right...there
1 posted 2003-01-06 04:51 PM


Fuel for your escape??

believe in what your heart feels...

Salty
Senior Member
since 2002-11-23
Posts 669
Texas
2 posted 2003-01-06 05:16 PM


Sounds like the real you needs to show itself.  I don't like being just a thophey either.  There is lots more to offer *S*


Nice write


~Salty

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