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Bohemianaus
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0 posted 2003-01-06 03:39 PM


White Supremacist


He sat in the room,

Alone among many,

Without courage to speak

The belief that he held.



Alone in his pain,

Avoiding the storm,

Tossed by the ideas

That challenged his norm.



Bullied by self,

His conflict was real,

Not without like

Could he find steel.



In company’s strength

His illness unhealed,

Desiring to spread

The infection revealed.



Alone he had cowered,

In company he flourished,

Yet ever confused

By antipathy nourished.



In the Margins he lives

With his life of unease,

Believing it righteous

To challenge and displease.



Yet he longingly yearns

For an innocence once known,

Before the anger was born,

And the removal of crown.



So amid the throng

Alone and without courage,

With hollowness and shadow

The ties of his bondage -

      He dies!

[This message has been edited by Bohemianaus (01-06-2003 03:56 PM).]

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GG
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1 posted 2003-01-07 06:16 PM


this is a sad and lonely post! Makes you.. or me at least... wonder if it was the loneliness that brought him to challenging everyone, or if its the other way around.. or if the two things fed on eachother.

Anyway, I enjoyed this much.
Keep writing.
Always, Alyssa

- And so it was that time stood still -
     (blink, breathe, stand, fight)

Bohemianaus
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2 posted 2003-01-07 06:29 PM


And that is the fundamental question of the poem - while at one level it is a critique of the person at the deepest level it asks that very question - thankyou for your comment GG

Boh


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