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Passionate Feelings Stirring (part # 5)
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Passionate Feelings Stirring (part # 5) |
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garysgirl  
since 2002-09-29
Posts 19237Florida, USA 
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These passionate feelings within us stirring Like no feelings we've felt before Such emotions from our inner selves Places we never before knew existed No other love has touched of us either Thinking past loves were real But not knowing the real depths of love The two of us together have discovered With each of our loves previously Though we were giving our all And receiving love like no other But learning those loves were only superficial With past loves we didn't realize the depths They were not totally complete Neither we or our loves previous Shared with each other this depth of you and I Our relationships of past years Were touched only on the surface Not down into the core of our beings As you and I are experiencing Previously not having the total communication Of mind, body, soul, in its entirety Our love we share is from within it being God-given, growing constantly, consistently [This message has been edited by garysgirl (01-06-2003 05:35 PM).] |
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Salty Senior Member
since 2002-11-23
Posts 669Texas |
If you never experience the deeper inner most love.....You never miss it. However you have now, so don't let it slip away. Sounds like you are one lucky lady Ethel. Good on U!! ~Salty In the Midst of movement and chaos, keep stillness inside of you. |
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neveah5 Member
since 2002-11-22
Posts 197Ohio |
Its a beautiful thing, the love you two share.  |
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quik Member
since 2002-11-27
Posts 91Dinwiddie,Virginia |
Thats nice, i love it. Long time no speak huh, well tryin to find some publishing deals with some of the top of the line companies. Well talk to ya lata |
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sweetwater Member
since 2002-12-16
Posts 178Perth |
"Our love we share is from within it being God-given, growing constantly, consistently" I'm not religious, but I love these lines.. the perfect end to this poem. |
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kayjay Member Elite
since 2002-06-24
Posts 2015Oregon |
The energy of your love life is a steady subject of your poetry. With such concentration and gratitude for your lives, you are a very fortunate couple. Always enjoy reading you. KJ Through rubble and trouble and dark of night |
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garysgirl
since 2002-09-29
Posts 19237Florida, USA |
Salty, we both feel lucky to have found each other. We realize more every day what we really have in each other. We want to hold on to it forever.....  "Love makes the world go around" ~~with love and hugs from Ethel~~ [This message has been edited by garysgirl (01-06-2003 08:14 PM).] |
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garysgirl
since 2002-09-29
Posts 19237Florida, USA |
Heather, thank you. We do have a beautiful love for each other. Thanks for replying. "Love makes the world go around" |
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garysgirl
since 2002-09-29
Posts 19237Florida, USA |
Hello Antonio  Yes it is a long time no see. I wondered where you had gotten off to. That's good, though, if you're planning to get published........ Good luck, friend. Stop in to see us more often, though. Okay...... Bye, see you later...  "Love makes the world go around" |
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garysgirl
since 2002-09-29
Posts 19237Florida, USA |
Thank you, sweetwater, I'm glad that you liked it..... "Love makes the world go around" |
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garysgirl
since 2002-09-29
Posts 19237Florida, USA |
Yes, Ken....... My Love and I are both very thankful for this love we've found in each other. With the bad relationships we've had before we met each other, we want to work harder on our relationship. Maybe we both grew up, finally, or something. I think if a couple really love each other, they will work harder to make it work... "Love makes the world go around" |
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Mistletoe Angel
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
 (tears fall down my cheeks) Oh Ethel, I swear I caught glimpses of the spiritual love having once had Joanna before she made her heartbreaking confession to me! (wipes tears) If I can only keep out of the crawlspace! (sad sigh) This is very touching, sweet friend, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Ethel, thank you for sharing! May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton "Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..." |
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garysgirl
since 2002-09-29
Posts 19237Florida, USA |
Oh, Noah, it hurts me to know that you have tears in your heart. I know that you really loved Joanna and that you understood the kind of love that Gary and I share. I wish I knew something to say to make you feel better, friend....... I'm so sorry... "Love makes the world go around" |
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