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vandana
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0 posted 2003-01-06 11:21 AM


You just here today
going to be mine forever
now
You and I are here
Close to your heart
Fell In love with you
Won't you love me?
Tonight
Let the stars so bright
To shine my love away
Let us be the same
let the ocean whispers
slowly to
the dawn
let you complete my heart
My heart for you
Let you be mine forever
Don't let the ray of light
spend more time with us
let the dawn come
Come and complete my heart
complete my love for you
complete
With your love for me
comeplete
Come and
complete my heart
complete
fillied your love
In my heart
let me slowly whisper your name
In your heart
let the love stay
till the dawn

[This message has been edited by vandana (01-06-2003 11:26 AM).]

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Midnitesun
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1 posted 2003-01-06 11:30 AM


Vandana, I do hope the dawn will last long for you.
garysgirl
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2 posted 2003-01-06 11:33 AM


Vandana, maybe your love will be completd soon. I hope so....

"Love makes the world go around"
~~with love and hugs from Ethel~~  
                  

gemjop
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3 posted 2003-01-06 11:38 AM


Vandana, this made me smile. it was full of hope.

"Let us be the same
let the ocean whispers
slowly to
the dawn
let you complete my heart"

i like this, its what we all want, look for, to be matched in feelings with someone, and when you have it, its so special.
well written vandana. i like your thoughts.
lots of love, gemma xxxxx

learning each day, for you and i, our paths have met, i've already learnt that you are love.

JamesMichael
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4 posted 2003-01-07 04:20 AM


It nice to feel complete...James
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5 posted 2003-01-07 04:22 AM




(big hugggsssssssss) I only hope your love story comes true and you find all the happiness you deserve, sweet friend, hopefully I will find this completeness sometime soon, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Vandana, thank you for sharing!



May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

"Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..."

Shakira

Kethry
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6 posted 2003-01-07 06:41 AM


What a love story that rises with the sun. Well done!
Kethry

Here in the midst of my lonely abyss, a single joy I find...your presence in my mind.  Unknown



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