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gemjop
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since 2002-11-18
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0 posted 2003-01-06 10:51 AM



Broken
in sleep
Its you.

Tipsy on zzz's
i answer
And you laugh.

Not even sweet slumber
could stop me
from listening.

Your voice
on the end
of the line.

Is priceless,
timeless,
a dream.

learning each day, for you and i, our paths have met, i've already learnt that you are love.

© Copyright 2003 gj - All Rights Reserved
Midnitesun
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Gaia
1 posted 2003-01-06 10:54 AM


Pleasant phone call? Not a telemarketer I presume. Have a great week, GEM.
garysgirl
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2 posted 2003-01-06 10:59 AM


Gemma, my feelings exactly when I hear my Love's voice on the
other end of the line.
He likes to hear me when I'm just waking up...
Your Love probably does, too. Most of the time, though, we have
our daily conversations at night, right before bed.
Thanks for sharing....  

"Love makes the world go around"
~~with love and hugs from Ethel~~  
                  

[This message has been edited by garysgirl (01-06-2003 10:59 AM).]

nakdthoughts
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Between the Lines
3 posted 2003-01-06 11:01 AM


that's very sweet. I have one of those silent phones..that barely rings *s
NewEnglandlazurlu
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A Mountain Paradise
4 posted 2003-01-06 11:09 AM


gemma, what a sexy, romantic write.

I enjoyed the dreaminess of this.

Hugs, Marti

Salty
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since 2002-11-23
Posts 669
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5 posted 2003-01-06 12:22 PM


I'm agreeing with Marti on this one.


Very much enjoyed the read


~Salty

In the Midst of movement and chaos, keep stillness inside of you.
--Deepak Chop

scorpio
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since 2002-10-02
Posts 5178
right...there
6 posted 2003-01-06 04:02 PM


Simple and beautiful..

believe in what your heart feels...

Aenimal
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the ass-end of space
7 posted 2003-01-06 09:29 PM


I liked this, brought back some nice memories of my high school sweetie, talking into the wee hours until we were both falling asleep and neither of us wanting to hang up...sigh
PoeTik JusTice
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since 2003-01-05
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8 posted 2003-01-06 09:39 PM


Very nice poem, simplicity can be so nice! I loved this!

XoXo Love Alwayz XoXo
     *~Serena~*
"The greatest thing you'll ever learn is to love, and be loved in return." --Moulin Rouge

inkedgoddess
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since 2002-11-19
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Ohio
9 posted 2003-01-06 09:51 PM


dreaming is nice, when they come true, its a hard call to keep the dream, or live the reality
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