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serenity blaze
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0 posted 2003-01-06 09:51 AM


I am budding wing today
pattern circles
wait for me
tunneling
infinity
I join the party of the hawk.

Remembering
the taste of brine
I am the elements divine.
spiraling
dip
and glide--

Today, the sky is mine.


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Seymour Tabin
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1 posted 2003-01-06 10:01 AM


serenity,
Elegant, eloquent and tasteful.

serenity blaze
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2 posted 2003-01-06 10:03 AM


sy? Wow! How'd I do that?

missed ya this morning lovie!


gemjop
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3 posted 2003-01-06 10:17 AM


Serenity, wonderful and full of spirit. uplifting and powerful. loved!
lots of love, gemma xxxxxxx

learning each day, for you and i, our paths have met, i've already learnt that you are love.

vandana
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4 posted 2003-01-06 10:22 AM


ENJOYED
serenity blaze
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5 posted 2003-01-06 10:24 AM


guess who is home alone today, stereo cranked and dancing in her drawse?

NOT ME.



Thanks for reading.

hmmm...now where's my Eric Burdon...spill wine--dig that girl..

Cpat Hair
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6 posted 2003-01-06 10:29 AM


go fly!!! good to see you doing that...
serenity blaze
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7 posted 2003-01-06 10:32 AM


Liking the view are ya?

giggle...(I lied about the drawse.)



it's gorgeous here today Cap. Will prolly hit 70 degrees. It's...MARDI GRAS WEATHER!!!

YAYAYAYAYAY--

RSWells
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8 posted 2003-01-06 10:34 AM


Uplifting, this ode to a "good" day.
serenity blaze
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9 posted 2003-01-06 10:36 AM


chuckle...sometimes I have the best parties all by MYSELF...

hugs Richard.

Enchantress
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10 posted 2003-01-06 11:23 AM


Wish I were there to fly with you!
You fly beautifully Serenity..
Have a fun day!
~Hugs~

~Time has cast a spell on you,
  So you won't ever forget me~

garysgirl
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11 posted 2003-01-06 11:29 AM


Karen, I love to read you when you're soaring free as a bird.....
You are delightful, Lady, and I love to "hear" you tell about
your feelings in your poetry....

BTW, this dense mind understands these kind better, for some reason??  




"Love makes the world go around"
~~with love and hugs from Ethel~~  
                  

[This message has been edited by garysgirl (01-06-2003 11:32 AM).]

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12 posted 2003-01-06 11:31 AM


Loved this morning flight, Serenity.
regards2you
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13 posted 2003-01-06 12:00 PM




Serenity,

This certainly beats a drunken butterfly, for they lack the grace you show in this flight, as was the point.
Enjoyed the sense of freedom....

Hugs, Pat

..without surrender, be on good terms with all persons..
        "Desiderata"

Krawdad
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14 posted 2003-01-06 01:27 PM


"tunneling
infinity"

lovely free thought
hold it as long as you can . . .

vlraynes
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15 posted 2003-01-06 01:36 PM



serenity~
Smiling big here...
Have fun.
Hugs,
~Vicky

"...until you have read the verse on his heart,
you have not truly met the poet.
~vlraynes

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16 posted 2003-01-06 03:39 PM



Serenity...fly high...
I like you playing
in my sky...

hannah44
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17 posted 2003-01-06 03:44 PM


beatiful and uplifting. very well done!
scorpio
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18 posted 2003-01-06 03:49 PM


Karen, soar and hunt with the hawks...see the details of life with sharp, clear vision...

believe in what your heart feels...

Aenimal
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19 posted 2003-01-06 09:16 PM


BIG SMILES
serenity blaze
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20 posted 2003-01-06 09:39 PM


well...that was exhilarating.

Safely back in the nest now good people.

For now.

thanks all, warm feathered hugs, as I wait to see my sky again.

Kielo
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21 posted 2003-01-06 10:06 PM


*grin* I told you so.

Kielo

I know only one thing, and that thing is that I know nothing.

brian sites
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22 posted 2003-01-07 02:02 AM


you were held.......
smile

serenity blaze
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23 posted 2003-01-07 02:17 AM


the sky...is without limit.

oh my...maybe I can sleep tonight?


Sudhir Iyer
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24 posted 2003-01-07 03:52 AM


Today, the sky is mine.

Then fly, dear one fly
as high as the sky
with wings spread
proud and wide
may rays of sun
tip your free soul
and make your serenity
blaze



regards,
sudhir

bsquirrel
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25 posted 2003-01-27 01:22 PM


Sweet.
Charisma
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26 posted 2003-01-27 01:39 PM


Beautiful!!

Charisma

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