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nakdthoughts
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Between the Lines

0 posted 2003-01-05 07:54 PM



I walked that line of want and need,
today awakened with a frown
then you appeared as if you knew
and turned my world upright from down

And talked as if time never flew
and distance seemed more near than far
my smiles returned, as I felt yours
a western warmth of words that are

Customized to fill the gap
as always when my ups are downed,
you reappear like magic wished
and send me forth in comfort gowned

A friendship lasting, forever bound
I walked that line and you, I found

"Love is not blind - It sees more and not less, but because it sees more, it is willing to see less."
(Will Moss)

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Enchantress
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Canada eh.
1 posted 2003-01-05 07:57 PM


"Customized to fill the gap
as always when my ups are downed,
you reappear like magic wished
and send me forth in comfort gowned

A friendship lasting, forever bound
I walked that line and you, I found"

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Very very beautiful Maureen.
I especially love these lines.
~Hugs & Smiles~

~Time has cast a spell on you,
  So you won't ever forget me~

Nightshade
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just out of reach
2 posted 2003-01-05 08:36 PM


Maureen - This is a pleasure to read. Friendship's like this are a treasure. Chris

"Hope" is the thing with feathers-
that perches in the soul....
                  
                       -Emily Dickinson

vandana
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3 posted 2003-01-05 08:41 PM


enjoyed
Kethry
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4 posted 2003-01-06 12:46 PM


Maureen,
this is lovely as usual. I love your play with words.
Kethry

Here in the midst of my lonely abyss, a single joy I find...your presence in my mind.  Unknown



passing shadows
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displaced
5 posted 2003-01-06 02:29 AM


just like magic! *smilng*
vlraynes
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Somewhere... out there...
6 posted 2003-01-06 04:10 AM



Maureen~
Such a lovely write this is.
I truly enjoyed the read.
Beautifully done.
Hugs,
~Vicky

"...until you have read the verse on his heart,
you have not truly met the poet.
~vlraynes

gemjop
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7 posted 2003-01-06 09:15 AM


Isnt it wonderful how that someone always gets there in the nick of time, and no matter how desolate you've been feeling, once they're there, you couldn't feel more happy. and they feel the same too.
this is beautiful, enjoyed very much.
lots of love gemma xxxxx

learning each day, for you and i, our paths have met, i've already learnt that you are love.

NewEnglandlazurlu
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A Mountain Paradise
8 posted 2003-01-06 09:37 AM


This brought a smile to my face. Anyone who has a friend like this, has treasures for a lifetime.

Wonderful ... hugs, Marti

SmartChick
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On A Journey To The Unknown
9 posted 2003-01-06 10:47 AM


Awww Maureen, this is beautiful.
nakdthoughts
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Between the Lines
10 posted 2003-01-06 10:55 AM


Thank you Nancy, sometimes  it's "funny" how when you need a friend, they are there, even if you hadn't seen or talked with them in months or even years.
nakdthoughts
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Between the Lines
11 posted 2003-01-06 10:58 AM


Thank you Chris and Vandana, it's always nice to be surprised *s

Hi Keth, I like to play with the words...sometimes it works and other times it doesn't. Glad it worked for you today.
hugssss
M

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