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1slick_lady
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standing on a shadow's lace

0 posted 2003-01-05 05:04 PM


In Tune

she flew
through stars
to touch
the man
in the moon
his whispers
serenades in
the key
that opened
her up
playing strings
to a
heart’s tune


"It is like looking for a blizzard in a glass snowball. Unless you shake it up not one flake will fly."


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Krawdad
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since 2001-01-03
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1 posted 2003-01-06 02:19 AM


h,
inspired a little something this did, hope you don't mind . . .


On darkened nights
across star filled skies
she sees new lights
through her tear filled eyes

From Saturn's ring
to Jupiter's moons
she hears him sing
ethereal tunes

Perhaps in time
as this planet turns
they'll be in rhyme
with each other's yearns



e

passing shadows
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since 1999-08-26
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displaced
2 posted 2003-01-06 02:20 AM


*smiling big*
Cpat Hair
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3 posted 2003-01-06 09:13 AM


such music sounds touching indeed...

very nicely done... very nice indeed.

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