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Bill Charles
Member Patricius

since 2000-07-11

Posts 10619
highways, & byways, for now

0 posted 2003-01-05 02:28 PM

“MY BREATH”
by
Bill Charles
~~~~
When we kissed last
night my breath was
taken away by the
softness of your
lips, and the
warmth of your
passionate embrace…
~~~~

Mistletoe Angel

Member Empyrean

since 2000-12-17

Posts 32816
Portland, Oregon

1 posted 2003-01-05 02:33 PM

(tears fall down my cheeks) Oh Bill, this is sooooooooo beautiful, sweet friend, forgive me as I'm not acting like myself missing my love so much as I know how special love really feels! (big hugggssssss) I wish for this warmth to awlays touch your heart, sweet friend, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Bill, thank you for sharing!

May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

"Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..."

Shakira

garysgirl

Member Laureate

since 2002-09-29

Posts 19237
Florida, USA

2 posted 2003-01-05 02:50 PM

Bill, there is so much emotion in these few words.

"Love makes the world go around"
~~with love and hugs from Ethel~~

gemjop
Member Elite

since 2002-11-18

Posts 2587
Pencilveinia, USA

3 posted 2003-01-05 03:42 PM

another appealing passionate write here Bill.
Enjoyed as ever.

love, gemma xxxxx

learning each day, for you and i, our paths have met, i've already learnt that you are love.

regards2you
Member Elite

since 2002-10-01

Posts 3940
California

4 posted 2003-01-05 04:41 PM

Bill,

Yes, they seem like the very breath of us, when we're in love, don't they?

What a wonderful poem...you manage to capture so much. Enjoyed.

Warm regards, Pat

..without surrender, be on good terms with all persons..
"Desiderata"

inkedgoddess
Member Rara Avis

since 2002-11-19

Posts 7392
Ohio

5 posted 2003-01-05 05:25 PM

i love breathlessness and then being revived again, over and over, and over, and over,
well i guess you get the point!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

Enchantress
Member Empyrean

since 2001-08-14

Posts 35113
Canada eh.

6 posted 2003-01-05 06:51 PM

Love this Bill...so much said in so few words.
~Hugs & Smiles, Nancy~

~Time has cast a spell on you,
So you won't ever forget me~

NewEnglandlazurlu
Member Rara Avis

since 2002-01-04

Posts 7470
A Mountain Paradise

7 posted 2003-01-05 06:53 PM

What lovely and warm words from a sweet man.

I liked this so much BC.

Hugs, Marti

vandana

Member Patricius

since 1999-10-22

Posts 10463
USA

8 posted 2003-01-05 08:44 PM

enjoyed

Magnus

Member Laureate

since 2001-10-10

Posts 14135
South Carolina, USA

9 posted 2003-01-05 08:48 PM

Hello there BC, musta been quite a smooch!!

Kethry
Member Rara Avis

since 2000-07-29

Posts 9082
Victoria Australia

10 posted 2003-01-07 07:02 AM

This piece is a life giving as breath.
Kethry

Here in the midst of my lonely abyss, a single joy I find...your presence in my mind. Unknown

Nan

Administrator

Member Seraphic

since 1999-05-20

Posts 21191
Cape Cod Massachusetts USA

11 posted 2003-01-07 07:45 AM

Sweet 'n' Simple, BCI - The best of the best...

JamesMichael
Member Empyrean

since 1999-11-16

Posts 33336
Kapolei, Hawaii, USA

12 posted 2003-01-09 04:27 AM

Fabulous Bill...James

Charisma

Member Ascendant

since 2000-09-30

Posts 5906
lost in blue pages

13 posted 2003-01-09 08:26 AM

*sigh* you know how to melt ladies hearts eh...

at least mine melted away with your words

Charisma

BloomingRose
Member Elite

since 2000-08-09

Posts 3092
Florida

14 posted 2003-01-09 09:17 AM

My kind of poem. Wonderfully romantic, with few words.

Deb

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