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0 posted 2003-01-05 01:50 PM


    

As you read words and
thoughts from our heart
We are sharing ourselves,
if just a small part
Writers have a way of
showing their emotion
If you read closely,
you will see their devotion
Sometimes we write
of our love, so fair
Other times a playful write,
we so glady share
Whether we write from
experience or imagination
We do it all with
care and dedication
Trying to share
feelings from our heart
We tell many of them,
if we ever start
Some of our tales
get very long, you see
They have to be continued,
parts one,  two,  and three
Other times they are written
very short and sweet
To the readers,
a nice little treat
No matter what we read,
on these pages of blue
It's part of the writer's heart,
written clear and true
We should always be careful
of what we have to say
Trying not to hurt
a heart we read today

                



[This message has been edited by garysgirl (01-05-2003 01:55 PM).]

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Bill Charles
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1 posted 2003-01-05 01:55 PM


garysgirl - writers do write with a lot of emotion. You have written this with such feelings of them. Nice write...

BC

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2 posted 2003-01-05 01:57 PM


Bill, I think when we really realize this, we are a lot more gentle and
compassionate with our responses, don't you?
Thank you for always being so nice and sweet...

"Love makes the world go around"
~~with love and hugs from Ethel~~  
                  

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3 posted 2003-01-05 02:12 PM




(tears fall down my cheeks) Oh Ethel, know when I am crying here you are not hurting me, it's just me, as I know just how you feel and I think of my Joanna and all the beautiful comments she used to write to me saying she loved me and gave me sweet sugary kisses on my lips and now she doesn't even want to be my friend anymore! (wipes tears) I guess I revealed a lot of heart here! (sad sigh) God Bless You, sweet friend, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Ethel, thank you for sharing!



May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

"Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..."

Shakira

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4 posted 2003-01-05 02:57 PM


Noah, sweet friend, all writers reveal "a part of heart".
That's what keeps us going when these terrible things in life
happen to us. Write, sweet friend, just write those feelings
out, even if you don't see fit to share those poems here.
Remember, we are all reaching out our hearts and hands to you, Noah....  

"Love makes the world go around"
~~with love and hugs from Ethel~~  
                  

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