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ThisDiamond
Member Rara Avis

since 2002-02-22

Posts 9353
Michigan, USA

0 posted 2003-01-05 12:15 PM

The toll of time would cease it's chime beneath the sound of sunrise
Turquoise seas upon their knees in swirling winds to capsize
Craft these visions wet in fissions fire and tempest fury fainting
To your heart as guardian art thou seeker bright
into this painting

This fairy call to stroke of all impressioned and outstanding
In lift and brush the pale of hush upon the glide commanding
To sail of these, born turquoise seas enchanted and uncharted
For all of time your heart to mine of sacred stream unparted

Copyright Kkh 1/4/03

[This message has been edited by ThisDiamond (01-05-2003 12:16 PM).]

garysgirl

Member Laureate

since 2002-09-29

Posts 19237
Florida, USA

1 posted 2003-01-05 12:23 PM

Kathleen, I love the way you write. You are a master at
rhyming, and it's absolutely beautiful......

"Love makes the world go around"
~~with love and hugs from Ethel~~

Wind

Member Elite

since 2002-10-12

Posts 2981

2 posted 2003-01-05 12:41 PM

Oh wow! That was so amaizing! I could imagine beautifull turquose wasters swirling around my feet. You are so talented!

Never be normal!

[This message has been edited by Wind (01-05-2003 03:29 PM).]

sweetwater
Member

since 2002-12-16

Posts 178
Perth

3 posted 2003-01-05 12:43 PM

I have to agree with the other posters.. this poem is beautiful and clever rhymes.. loved it.

NewEnglandlazurlu
Member Rara Avis

since 2002-01-04

Posts 7470
A Mountain Paradise

4 posted 2003-01-05 12:51 PM

Kathleen, this brought to mind our winter vacations in the Caribbean. Lounging on pure white sands and swimming and boating in crystal clear turquoise seas.

Thank you for taking me away from the cold and knee high snow.

Hugs, Marti

Magnus

Member Laureate

since 2001-10-10

Posts 14135
South Carolina, USA

5 posted 2003-01-05 12:53 PM

Kathy, you always write with impeccable
inner rhyme and cadence....A superb palette
of words from a master's pen...

Enjoyed the painting..

Bill Charles
Member Patricius

since 2000-07-11

Posts 10619
highways, & byways, for now

6 posted 2003-01-05 02:13 PM

ThisDiamond - your words are like the soft breeze that caresses the forest, the sea, and thoughts of the reader...

BC

Mistletoe Angel

Member Empyrean

since 2000-12-17

Posts 32816
Portland, Oregon

7 posted 2003-01-05 02:36 PM

(big hugggsssssssss) This is precious, sweet friend, I love it, I wish for your journey to always be a calm one among gentle reflection, sweet friend, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Kathleen, thank you for sharing!

May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

"Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..."

Shakira

regards2you
Member Elite

since 2002-10-01

Posts 3940
California

8 posted 2003-01-06 05:01 AM

Perfectly painted. So beautiful.

Warm regards, Pat

..without surrender, be on good terms with all persons..
"Desiderata"

inkedgoddess
Member Rara Avis

since 2002-11-19

Posts 7392
Ohio

9 posted 2003-01-06 06:51 AM

beautiful description of the openness of the seas

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