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0 posted 2003-01-05 11:59 AM


From the core of our beings
we feel
Love so devine,  could only be
from God
A true love,  with promises of
endurance

This love,  felt with passion
stirring
Emotions felt strongly,  with
desire
With want and longing we both
share

Desire to please each other in
every way
Physical,  emotional,  sensual
feelings
Stirred within us,  with love
unconditional

Loving,  needing each other
always
Within us,  fire burning,
never-ending
Forever,  a flame burning with desire for
each other

We,  thinking we had lost this,
this feeling
This love we share,  though similar,
different
Like no other love either has ever
experienced

This love that fills every inch of
our bodies
From the very top of,  our heads to
our feet
To the very tips of our
fingers

We feel pleasure,  contentment,
fulfillment
In every fiber of our beings
is love
Physical,  mental,  emotional,
spiritual
This awakened love we share,  me for you,
you for me


[This message has been edited by garysgirl (01-05-2003 12:00 PM).]

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1 posted 2003-01-05 12:04 PM


well.. I'll be! We DO feel that way dont we?

reading this makes me glad

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2 posted 2003-01-05 12:12 PM


"Physical,  mental,  emotional,
spiritual
This awakened love we share,  me for you,
you for me"
i loved it all ,especially those words above..
a share of a passion, isn't it?
waiting for more...



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3 posted 2003-01-05 12:14 PM


Thank you, Eagle Scorpion. I'm glad that it made you "feel glad"...

"Love makes the world go around"
~~with love and hugs from Ethel~~  
                  

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4 posted 2003-01-05 12:17 PM


Rainman, I'm glad that you liked it. Yes, the passion is definately shared....in every way.....  

"Love makes the world go around"
~~with love and hugs from Ethel~~  
                  

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5 posted 2003-01-05 02:02 PM


You write of every emotion and thought i feel for my Rhys. I am loving this series of poems. they sincerely get better each time. this gave me goose bumps with its truth. i identify with your feelings completely. thanks for being the hopeless real romantic that you are Ethel. you don't realise the talent you posess for putting into words all these magical feelings we feel, i for one struggle, but reading yours make up for not being able to write myself on paper what i feel.



Thanks again Ethel, for your expressive way with words.

lots of love, gemma xxxxxx

learning each day, for you and i, our paths have met, i've already learnt that you are love.

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6 posted 2003-01-05 02:07 PM


garysgirl - a'hhhh, the passion is wonderful and without end...

BC

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7 posted 2003-01-05 02:16 PM




(tears fall down my cheeks) Oh Ethel, this is so beautiful, sweet friend, I caught a glimpse of how spiritual and uncanny a love can really be so I can relate and just the thought of it makes me cry even more! (wipes tears) God Bless You, sweet friend, this is gorgeous, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Ethel, thank you for sharing!



May love and light always shine upon you!

Love.
Noah Eaton

"Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..."

Shakira

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8 posted 2003-01-05 02:21 PM


Gemma, thank you so much, friend. Your words made me feel so good.
I am really glad that you identify with the words I write about
my Gary and me. Sometimes it's very hard for me to put all these wonderful
feelings and emotions onto paper in just the way I want to. It is fun
trying, though. I'm glad that you enjoy reading my poems.   

Oh, and thanks very much for putting it into your library.....  

"Love makes the world go around"
~~with love and hugs from Ethel~~  
                  

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9 posted 2003-01-05 02:23 PM


Thank you so much, Bill. I really appreciate your reading and
replying to my poems. I love reading yours, too.  

"Love makes the world go around"
~~with love and hugs from Ethel~~  
                  

[This message has been edited by garysgirl (01-05-2003 02:24 PM).]

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10 posted 2003-01-05 02:38 PM


Oh Noah...
I'm so sorry for what you're going through. I don't mean to make you cry.
I hope and pray that you'll be smiling again soon, sweet Noah...   

"Love makes the world go around"
~~with love and hugs from Ethel~~  
                  

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11 posted 2003-01-05 05:20 PM


Ethel, this is beutiful; im truthfully, not very big on God, or is he is there, i believe he too, is part of the bigger picture,  but this is loving and spiritual
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12 posted 2003-01-05 06:56 PM


Sound like true and lasting love to me! There is nothing like it.

"...From the core of our beings
we feel
Love so devine,  could only be
from God..."

I couldn't agree more Ethel.

I'm working on writing some love poems just cause you asked!!!  Hugs, Marti

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13 posted 2003-01-05 07:13 PM


inkedgoddess, I really do appreciate your comments. You are sweet.  thank you....

"Love makes the world go around"
~~with love and hugs from Ethel~~  
                  

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14 posted 2003-01-05 07:24 PM


Thank you, Marti, for your sweet reply.
And, I'll be looking for your love poems. I'm sure they'll be beautiful, just as all your poetry is......

"Love makes the world go around"
~~with love and hugs from Ethel~~  
                  

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15 posted 2003-01-06 04:32 AM


HEY! I know I read this and replied! Who stole my reply????

...Alert ...Alert ...Alert!

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16 posted 2003-01-06 10:24 AM


Dixie, thanks for reading again.....

"Love makes the world go around"
~~with love and hugs from Ethel~~  
                  

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