Open Poetry #24 |
Best Friends Story Ends |
MattGarcia Junior Member
since 2003-01-04
Posts 19Texas, USA |
umm, just another old poem i wrote a while back....this one needs more work than the first i'd say, but i figured i'd give it a shot anyway. -Best Friends Story Ends- I think about her all the time Infact shes all thats on my mind I want us to atleast stay friends but this pain i feel just will not end I havent said the nicest things lately my hatred has just had wings I never saw the end as it neared losing my friend i never feared my heart belonged to my new best friend now her heart belongs to him Perhaps our love should have waited but i feared it would become outdated He stole her heart from under my nose and just like that, off she goes I have already lost my new best friend The story just begun, and now, the end Dont cry because its over....smile because it happened |
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Denea Furr Junior Member
since 2002-11-03
Posts 31Indiana |
It's funny how that seems to happen when it's so obvious but you don't really notice. Nice write. I hope to hear more and I look forward to posting more compliments to more of your great work. |
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regards2you Member Elite
since 2002-10-01
Posts 3940California |
This is sad, Matt and I hope you've been able to move on. Thanks for posting this for you've touched an area most have felt at one time or another. Hugs and warm regards, Pat ..without surrender, be on good terms with all persons.. |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
MattGarcia Always enjoy plain talk, enjoyed. |
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FLOWERGIRL Junior Member
since 2003-01-04
Posts 40the woods of Pa |
matt the story continues/life goes on/ the hearts potential to love again will reborn wiser and stronger/ your poem touched a spot in my past/ but i was the girl stole away right from under his nose |
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garysgirl
since 2002-09-29
Posts 19237Florida, USA |
Matt, you wrote this good, but it feels sad. I hope that you're feeling better if it's about you. Thanks for sharing your poetry wioth us... "Love makes the world go around" |
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