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Denea Furr
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Indiana

0 posted 2003-01-05 04:17 AM



I want him to follow in my footsteps
I want him to be the most friendly person he can
I want him to be the heartbreaker he will
I want him to know how much he means to me
He is only almost 4 and yet he seems so much older
I don't know what I would do without him
He means so much to me
He likes all the little boy stuff
Growing up with 3 sisters makes that surprising
He is one of the best things that has ever happened to me
In the morning he watches me go off to school
Those sad little eyes make me want to stay
He is there in the afternoon when I get home
I always expect the same hug and kiss
The cute little voice and his eyes go from sad to excited instantly
He is the best little person in the world to me
He is my little brother
He is my best friend


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Magnus
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1 posted 2003-01-05 09:58 AM


The loyalty of a sister...that understands
the love of a little brother...very nice..

LADY_DEATH
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2 posted 2003-01-05 11:05 AM


I am the older sister of my younger brother.
He's 25 now and married but i still try to give him guidance.The love never stops!But great poem.You are definately "his hero"!


garysgirl
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3 posted 2003-01-05 11:33 AM


Oh, this is so sweet and touching. I only have one brother (no sisters), and he is 6 years younger than me. I've always felt protective of him......He's bigger than me (lots taller), and he's always felt protective of me, too....

"Love makes the world go around"
~~with love and hugs from Ethel~~  
                  

Seymour Tabin
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Tamarac Fla
4 posted 2003-01-05 11:42 AM


Denea,
Lovely write and read.

DonFurr
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since 2001-01-01
Posts 172
Monticello IN
5 posted 2003-01-05 01:04 PM


Your proud father has read this words
and smiled through his tears
What you never said aloud
you have sung through your finger tips

I Love You!!!

"If there is any doubt about it there is no doubt about it." Linnie Stanton


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