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JamesMichael
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0 posted 2003-01-05 03:58 AM


Knife Fighting

Do you know how fast
a knife can penetrate
the life giving parts of
your body and drain all
the blood from you?

One thousand one.
One thousand two.

In a matter of
heartbeats
your life
on this earth
could be
through.

JamesLee
January03
2002
Wrote this after
watching Gangs
of New York.

© Copyright 2003 JamesMichael - All Rights Reserved
GG
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since 2002-12-03
Posts 3532
Lost in thought
1 posted 2003-01-05 05:10 PM


yikes.. I just watched a show on bullet proof vests last night, And then another on vests and such for knife protection, essentially a chainmail type thing.

And yes.. so, so horribly fast things can come to an end.. we just never know......

Always, Alyssa

- And so it was that time stood still -
     (blink, breathe, stand, fight)

MattGarcia
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since 2003-01-04
Posts 19
Texas, USA
2 posted 2003-01-05 06:32 PM


that was a crazy movie btw, the Butcher was all skinny and weird, but he could throw those knives.
ccvulture
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since 2002-11-06
Posts 16

3 posted 2003-01-05 06:37 PM


Yeah, not bad this actually. Conversational, almost confessional - are you playing the Bond assassin or the suicide expert?!

cheers
CCV

passing shadows
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displaced
4 posted 2003-01-06 04:34 AM


yuck!
inkedgoddess
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since 2002-11-19
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5 posted 2003-01-06 06:56 AM


yuck is right;
however, its true, knife or not, james,
it could all be over in seconds.
driving to work, i get this flash, like wow, this could be it.

JamesMichael
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6 posted 2003-01-07 03:42 AM


Thank you GG, Matt, ccvulture, passing shadows and ink for responding...
Even though one of the stars of this movie was Leonardo I had the feeling that many of those of the female persuasion would avoid this movie due to the violence...His other movie "Catch Me If You Can" is more of a feel good type of movie....James

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