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World Weaver
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World Weaver |
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Kethry Member Rara Avis
since 2000-07-29
Posts 9082Victoria Australia 
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Weave on - beloved heart, weave true For I am woven close to you, And in the weaving dark and light We have the power to hold the night We stay the tide and keep its rue Weave on - beloved heart, weave true Weave well beloved - join the song As earthen weave is brought along Hear the trees and weave the breeze Their power woven, brings us ease The warp is fine the weft is strong Weave well beloved - join the song Weave proud beloved, on this day The call has come to weave away And heal the world now found bereft And weave together warp and weft A weave of love is our mainstay Weave proud beloved, on this day Weave deep beloved heart, weave wide Till all the world is wrapped inside The strands of love are threads of power And weaving souls armours the hour The joy, the hope, the strength, the pride Is formed my love when you weave wide Weave life beloved one and breath Weave on in hope, not fear of death The world is dying inch by inch And in the weaving is the clinch, That holds away the doors of hell Weave life, weave hope, love; weave me well Here in the midst of my lonely abyss, a single joy I find...your presence in my mind. Unknown |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
intriguing, very creative write |
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inkedgoddess Member Rara Avis
since 2002-11-19
Posts 7392Ohio |
woven together all the good things in life to keep you warm on a dark night nice creative |
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Magnus
since 2001-10-10
Posts 14135South Carolina, USA |
I see somewhat of a similarity in two pieces, though your own is written much more beautifully.... |
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Gentle Spirit Member Patricius
since 2000-10-09
Posts 13989 |
Very well done Kethry, enjoyed this. |
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Bohemianaus Member
since 2003-01-05
Posts 69Australia (South Gippsland) |
On second reading I am intrigued by the shifting pivot points that occur because of the lack of punctuation - at once thoughtful, intriguing as well as entertaining. I like it very much. |
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Marsha
since 2000-07-10
Posts 7423Maidstone Kent England |
Keth beloved one you already know that I think this is exceedingly good, when you write like this I’m taken into realms of magic. Don’t believe me if you don’t want to, but you know this is true, YOUR writing shines, and this is so typical of you, exquisite writing that sings to my soul. Forgive me beloved one I couldn't resist Weave well beloved, weave for me Stitch the truth of what you see Weave the thread up and through Weave for me and weave for you Weave well beloved, weave it true Weave the picture weave the view Show the signs that I need to see Weave through the warp of eternity Weave well beloved, weave the word Put into the fabric all you’ve heard Lace the thoughts in and out Weave the certainty omit the doubt Weave well beloved, weave all day Then weave as the night fades away Place all you are and all you know Weave it well and then let go Weave the magic beloved heart do And I’ll gather all the threads for you rolling:   Love and warm stuff As always Slushy  Breathe through the heat of our desire |
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garysgirl 
since 2002-09-29
Posts 19237Florida, USA |
Kethry, this is so beautiful. I love the way you wrote this...  "Love makes the world go around" |
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