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D.Lester Young
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since 2001-12-08
Posts 1219
Austin, Tx

0 posted 2003-01-05 01:31 AM


In love raining down on me
Refreshing my soul
From the essence of your presence
Clinging in the moisture of your kisses
To drench me in total emersion
Flooding every pore
With your fragrance
In such a hypnotic trance
As to blossom within my heart
Exploding in total euphoria
Of your special touches

In the sky so full of static
Charges electrifying the horizons
That the storm’s magnetism gravitates
In continuous heat lightning
Within the friction of our desires
Erupting in a cyclonic roller coaster ride
Taking us higher and higher
To only then, start over
In cuddles so perfect
That the goose bumps feel every
Emotion possible

In the erotic heavens
Where the stars in your eyes
Twinkle in a climatic display
Of your special charms
Smiling in the evening chill
To please my warmth
Of needing you to raise
My temperature
To the highest degree
In a sweat
That only true love
Can be consumed with

Oh baby I need you so
To rock and roll
In the blues
So emotionally high
That every note is felt
With such an intensity
As to enter
Quaking in the vibrations
Of the greatest music
Known to man

Oh yes baby,
Oh yes baby,
Do it again,
And again,
And again.
Till time runs out.
Wow!
You really hit a nerve
On that one
Oh baby,
YES!


Thought: Love is the language that unites the world in one way or another.

D.Lester Young 1/5/2003
Tuscaloosa, AL
Copyright © D.Lester Young (White Eagle poetry)

[This message has been edited by D.Lester Young (01-05-2003 01:33 AM).]

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passing shadows
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displaced
1 posted 2003-01-05 02:20 AM


oh my...*getting up to turn heater off*
JamesMichael
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since 1999-11-16
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Kapolei, Hawaii, USA
2 posted 2003-01-05 03:51 AM


I think you need her Lester...James
regards2you
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since 2002-10-01
Posts 3940
California
3 posted 2003-01-05 08:09 AM




Isn't it amazing we flat out don't get electrocuted during the making of love?  smiling here....liked this....

at least going around with our body and head hair singed and smoldering...
tsk...picture that...ha!

warm regards,  Pat  

..without surrender, be on good terms with all persons..
        "Desiderata"

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