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Aenimal
Member Rara Avis

since 2002-11-18

Posts 7350
the ass-end of space

0 posted 2003-01-05 01:08 AM

Red stained,veins,
tiny cracks on an eggshell
How eyes do burn
for sleep..
Out of their corner
I catch the shadows
that scurry by
Pieces of me
broken free
for a look
without restraint
of the outside in
Whispers
and murmurs
I hear
I feel
They do not like
what they now see
For I am no longer them
or they are no longer me
Or
perhaps
I just need
to sleep

wranx
Member Elite

since 2002-06-07

Posts 3689
Moved from a shack to a barn

1 posted 2003-01-05 01:41 AM

A good read Raff.
But dude!!!
Get some sleep!

Ed

Aenimal
Member Rara Avis

since 2002-11-18

Posts 7350
the ass-end of space

2 posted 2003-01-05 01:53 AM

Dude! lol Like I'm tryin i'm trying lol Thanks for stopping in riverman. Stay warm.

passing shadows
Member Empyrean

since 1999-08-26

Posts 45577
displaced

3 posted 2003-01-05 02:17 AM

"I catch the shadows that scurry by..."

is that kinda like passing?

You definately caught me with this poem!

Rainbowdust
Member

since 2002-12-05

Posts 320
Sydney, Australia

4 posted 2003-01-05 06:04 AM

Out of their corner
I catch the shadows
that scurry by
Pieces of me
broken free
for a look
without restraint
of the outside in

I've seen those shadows so many times and never wondered that this is what they might be! I loved this poem Raph; ah the children of insomnia...

The soul would have no rainbows, had the eyes no tears.

serenity blaze
Member Empyrean

since 2000-02-02

Posts 27738

5 posted 2003-01-05 07:17 AM

*shaking my head and grinning*

love the way your mind works.

loved this, m'friend.

inkedgoddess
Member Rara Avis

since 2002-11-19

Posts 7392
Ohio

6 posted 2003-01-05 12:57 PM

sleep yes,
but out of restlessness comes the above,
try the warm milk and cookies, also, what about the left hand right hand shake to knock you out for a while

Aenimal
Member Rara Avis

since 2002-11-18

Posts 7350
the ass-end of space

7 posted 2003-01-05 01:31 PM

Could be Dixie could be, thanks for the read

Thanks Rainbowdust, this poem came out of a chat i was having with serenity blaze at about 4 in the morning, I actually said this at one point in the converstaion and then thought it would make a decent poem

Speak of the witch, we are like minds so the compliment goes both ways K, hope you're feeling better

Agreed Inked, i have to lay off the shake though, i'll go blind lol

[This message has been edited by Aenimal (01-05-2003 01:32 PM).]

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