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Like a Lover
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Like a Lover |
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BluesSerenade Member Patricius
since 2001-10-23
Posts 10549By the Seaside 
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I heard footsteps around midnight padding down the hallway approaching my train of thought and I imagined you there. In the distance a whistle blew bridging my infatuation a trail of smoke hung in the balance tunneled through a revelation. Steaming in the night crossing over my heart as your cloak flew and swirled around me suspended from the bluest moon. You held your arms out as we waltzed through the air and danced in the wind to an apparition of love. The warmest breeze kicked up my heels a sudden flurry that made me dizzy raining star dust from the sky as I closed my eyes and time stood still. Save for a whispered tease in a summer nights dream when I'm needing you it comes to me. The whole of my adoration my sole inspiration like a lover who holds the key turning over in slow motion. |
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wranx Member Elite
since 2002-06-07
Posts 3689Moved from a shack to a barn |
Cool write Ed |
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BluesSerenade Member Patricius
since 2001-10-23
Posts 10549By the Seaside |
thanx wranx  |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
very consuming-feeling... |
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Sandpiper Senior Member
since 2002-06-15
Posts 738land of flora and fauna |
Wow!!...reads like a sensual dance on a warm summer night--enjoyed!! "And it was at that age...Poetry arrived in search of me...And something started in my soul." |
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ctowen Member Elite
since 2001-10-18
Posts 2286Green Mountains of VT |
Excellently done!! A dream well weaved, of heartstrings and the molding clay of a beautiful imagination. Smiles to you my friend. |
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Wind
since 2002-10-12
Posts 2981 |
I couldn't think of anything to say. Never be normal! |
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LADY_DEATH Member
since 2002-11-29
Posts 105Fl |
An eternal love dance!Cool! |
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garysgirl 
since 2002-09-29
Posts 19237Florida, USA |
A very dreamy, sensual, romantic poem... I liked....  "Love makes the world go around" |
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Bill Charles Member Patricius
since 2000-07-11
Posts 10619highways, & byways, for now |
BluesSerenade - love your thoughts in this write, especially about the dancing. I love to dance, and you expressed it very well... BC |
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ecrivan Member Elite
since 2001-12-10
Posts 3923my own state |
enchanting write |
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Aenimal Member Rara Avis
since 2002-11-18
Posts 7350the ass-end of space |
wonderful words thanks for sharing them |
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Mistletoe Angel
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
 (big hugggssssssss) Oh Lori, this is soooooo beautiful, sweet friend, forgive me as I'm crying, it's all just me grieving my loss and I know how precious such an afterglow can be! (sigh) This is a precious gem, sweet friend, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Lori, thank you for sharing! May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton "Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..." |
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inkedgoddess Member Rara Avis
since 2002-11-19
Posts 7392Ohio |
beautiful, dreamlover, comes to me in a dream, daylight returns, i wait for sleep to return him once again to me [This message has been edited by inkedgoddess (01-05-2003 05:42 PM).] |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
Lovely Lori... Much enjoyed the read. ~Hugs~ ~Time has cast a spell on you, |
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ShadowRider Senior Member
since 2001-07-14
Posts 1038USA |
The mind wanders late at night with pleasant thoughts and we, but the reader of their whims. Of your poetry of late, this one I enjoyed the writing in the most, Lor. Jeff Happy New Year! |
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ccvulture Junior Member
since 2002-11-06
Posts 16 |
like wrapping a thick coat around yourself on a cold night. thanx CCV |
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Cpat Hair
since 2001-06-05
Posts 11793 |
nice work my friend... and if not for dreams..at times we would have nothing to look forward to.. |
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