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Wind
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0 posted 2003-01-04 11:20 PM


teardrop moon,
eyes so far away,
so far away from me.
dancing in the rain
grass grows tall
trying to get free

I'm like a desert storm,
breif and hard,
brings a flood,
leaves the ground dry
leaves the sky wet,
wet with my grief

hey I'm happy again, you know this is me pretenting to be someone else. If I didn't, how would I be interesting? not to say that I pretend to be something I am not. Oh well. I'll shut up now. Oh bye the way, I'm back and here to stay. I feel bad, I left for a while, and thought about maybee not coming back. then I realized what an idiot I would have been for doing that.

do you guys think I am a mystery? I get a lot of that from my friends.

Never be normal!

© Copyright 2003 Liz - All Rights Reserved
Magnus
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1 posted 2003-01-04 11:31 PM


No Liz,  I think you are a young lady just
trying to mature...learning a lot...and
doing a wonderful job of expressing yourself.

Not a thing wrong in that..

Glad you didn't leave..

garysgirl
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2 posted 2003-01-04 11:44 PM


Liz, I echo everything Barry said.

And what's this about you thinking of leaving? I was afraid of that when I didn't see you here for a few days. Now, just what made you want to do that, young lady?

Seriously, Liz, you have made a lot of friends here who would miss you a lot if you left......me being one of those friends.

"Love makes the world go around"
~~with love and hugs from Ethel~~  
                  

Aenimal
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3 posted 2003-01-05 12:37 PM


grass grows tall trying to get free

I loved this line above the rest. As for you being a mystery it wouldn't be a bad thing after all like you say in your little  signature line
"never be normal!"

Sunshine
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4 posted 2003-01-05 08:38 AM



Liz, I'm glad you decided to come back, because there's a lot in you that needs sharing, and through your writing, you have a good outlet.  Welcome home.

Seymour Tabin
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5 posted 2003-01-05 08:42 AM


Wind
Everyone is a mystery, enjoyed.

ThisDiamond
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6 posted 2003-01-05 12:23 PM


Hello,
Welcome back.  Glad you decided to stay for a while.  We are all a mystery...the very best parts of us...
A wonderful mystery with strength, and heart, and spirit.
Like the wind... ThisDiamond

bsquirrel
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7 posted 2003-01-09 12:20 PM


In every lie is a kernel of truth.
gemjop
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8 posted 2003-01-09 12:52 PM


Dont you dare go anywhere Elizabeth!! That is a threat!!!! your words mean too much to us all not to have them every day. You have been warned. lol.
love, gem xxxxxx

learning each day, for you and i, our paths have met, i've already learnt that you are love.

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