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jeffwillett
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since 2003-01-04
Posts 86
Texas, US

0 posted 2003-01-04 10:37 PM


-Memories-

The cool breeze.
The summer air.
It reminds me of when,
You were there.

The warm grass.
The cold wood.
We sat all night,
I said all I could.

The long nights.
The late walks.
It makes me think,
Of those endless talks.

So many things,
Remind me of you,
How everyday,
Seemed brand new.

© Copyright 2003 Jeff L Willett - All Rights Reserved
visitvenus
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since 2002-12-30
Posts 101
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1 posted 2003-01-04 10:54 PM


Wonderfully expressed.  I can relate.

-Venus

regards2you
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since 2002-10-01
Posts 3940
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2 posted 2003-01-04 10:58 PM




Jeff,

Memories....you captured what many of us have in our minds. I like this.


Warm regards, Pat

..without surrender, be on good terms with all persons..
        "Desiderata"

BluesSerenade
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since 2001-10-23
Posts 10549
By the Seaside
3 posted 2003-01-05 12:47 PM


Welcome Jeff....
Seems there is always something there to remind us, but I try not to look back, the past lies where it's meant to be.


MattGarcia
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since 2003-01-04
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Texas, USA
4 posted 2003-01-05 12:58 PM


nice one man, so much for having trouble making it flow
vlraynes
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5 posted 2003-01-06 03:34 AM



Jeff~
I really enjoyed the flow and the feel of this.
Very nicely penned.
Welcome to Passions.
~Vicky

"...until you have read the verse on his heart,
you have not truly met the poet.
~vlraynes

passing shadows
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6 posted 2003-01-06 03:36 AM


mmmm, what memories!
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7 posted 2003-01-07 12:58 PM


enjoyed reading this
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