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Winter.......Tanka
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Winter.......Tanka |
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Charisma
since 2000-09-30
Posts 5906lost in blue pages 
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 Winter View over winter Sky blue shimmer upon white gleam of golden ray soften rocky mountain range frozen river lingers on ~*Theresia~* |
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Cpat Hair
since 2001-06-05
Posts 11793 |
you captured it well with both the image and the words... nicely done. |
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gemjop Member Elite
since 2002-11-18
Posts 2587Pencilveinia, USA |
i loved lingering on your words and the pic. very much enjoyed charisma. lots of love, gem xxxxxx learning each day, for you and i, our paths have met, i've already learnt that you are love. |
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Titia Geertman Member Ascendant
since 2001-05-07
Posts 5182Netherlands |
Oh how I've missed your beautiful little rhymes....glad to see you back Charisma. And I love your new pic up there. Titia Like scattered leaves...my words will flow [This message has been edited by Titia Geertman (01-07-2003 06:05 PM).] |
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vandana
since 1999-10-22
Posts 10463USA |
ENJOYED THIS  |
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BluesSerenade Member Patricius
since 2001-10-23
Posts 10549By the Seaside |
Absolutely stunning! |
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Nightshade
since 2001-08-31
Posts 13962just out of reach |
beautiful !! Chris "Hope" is the thing with feathers- |
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Mistletoe Angel
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
 (sigh) Oh Charisma, this is lovely, sweet friend, I wish for winters visions to always bring smiles to your heart and to fill you with peace! (kiss on cheek) I'm happy you're back, sweet friend, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Charisma, thank you for sharing!  May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton "Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..." |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
 WhooHoo! Beautiful! |
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regards2you Member Elite
since 2002-10-01
Posts 3940California |
Wow, this is a gift. You captured, perfectly, the scene. Love it! Hugs and warm regards, Pat ..without surrender, be on good terms with all persons.. |
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Toerag Member Ascendant
since 1999-07-29
Posts 5622Ala bam a |
Yanno Charisma.....studying your picture here.....(where it looks like your neck is about 4 feet long)....I can see how you can not only "view over winter"....but over a bunch of things.......Enjoyed the write gal.....LOL |
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Charisma
since 2000-09-30
Posts 5906lost in blue pages |
Cpat Hair: Thank you so much for your nice words *s* gemjop: I'm very glad you enjoyed it Titia: I missed you all too, missed writing too, and glad you liked the pic. Vandana: glad you enjoyed dear friend BluesSerenade: thanks you Chris: thank you for the beautiful *s* Noah: its always a pleasure to read your comments...thank you for always being here my friend. passing shadows: thank you Pat: thank you, im glad you love it Toerag: shhhhh, don't shout it out that loud...thought it was my lil secret, but then I couldn't hide it for you eh  |
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Nan
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-05-20
Posts 21191Cape Cod Massachusetts USA |
Very nice, Charisma - It's wonderful to see you posting - This is a lovely view of winter... |
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CSKpoet Senior Member
since 2002-07-12
Posts 845Island in Paradise |
I am so Happy to see you posting and this was quite elegant and serene..you doing the wonderful gems of tanka is such a treat hugs, Cher Poetry is: |
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enchantingvamp Member
since 2002-12-21
Posts 214Indiana, & NO there is NOT more than corn in Indiana, oughta go back to texas! |
I this one made me view the winter out my window in a very different and more light hearted manner, great read. |
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VAS Member Rara Avis
since 2000-11-16
Posts 7450Oregon |
lovely photo, lovely poem Whether on the shoal or on the shore, |
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Midnitesun
since 2001-05-18
Posts 28647Gaia |
 waving to you from nearby those Rockies. It's been dry in Denver, but the mountains shine with snow. Enjoyed the picture, the poetry, and seeing your smile again. |
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garysgirl
since 2002-09-29
Posts 19237Florida, USA |
Charisma, this is beautiful. I haven't seen much of you since I've been here, but I really look forward to reading more of your work. This poem is so refreshing....... Thank you..... "Love makes the world go around" |
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Charisma
since 2000-09-30
Posts 5906lost in blue pages |
Nan: Thank you Nan, its feels good too, to be inspired once again. Cher: Glad to see you here and happy that you enjoyed this lil one, dear friend. enchantingvamp: winter can be so beautiful, thank you for the kind reply Vas: Thank you Midnitesun: waving back at you, you are so lucky to live that close to this beautiful area.garysgirl: thank you for your kind reply, I haven't wrote much lately, that's why you haven't seen much from me... |
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NewEnglandlazurlu Member Rara Avis
since 2002-01-04
Posts 7470A Mountain Paradise |
Beautiful and stunning in both picture and words. I just loved this. Hugs, Marti Most of us go to our grave |
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christian Member
since 2002-12-18
Posts 331 |
hm. [i'm trying to find a way to be nice seeing as i don't really go for these types of poems--short ones]. nice picture, :smirk: |
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vlraynes Member Rara Avis
since 2000-07-25
Posts 8229Somewhere... out there... |
Charisma~ This is beautiful in both picture and words. Wonderful to see you, my friend...you've been missed. Hugs, ~Vicky "...until you have read the verse on his heart, |
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