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Sunkissed Senior Member
since 2002-12-03
Posts 610 |
And if I weren't gritty Would you have still wanted me? Down to earth I am Down to earth is where you Found me & for a while, did I Not please you? I am flawed Like so many others before Enamored or awed by The image of rainbows & Mystery You've finally arrived At me But don't be Terribly disappointed You were sweeter than Rain washed skies To me, You were more than A carefully constructed phrase in time or space More than white candles Or lace praises that with a click can disappear like confessions on a deaf ear See, I favored us both & swore an oath To let it all float softly Down to earth & settle Here... |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Sunkissed A sunkissed flower, enjoyed |
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Sunkissed Senior Member
since 2002-12-03
Posts 610 |
Thank you, Seymour.  Sunkissed. |
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Bill Charles Member Patricius
since 2000-07-11
Posts 10619highways, & byways, for now |
Sunkissed - your words are as warm as the sun when it kissed you... BC |
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Gentle Spirit Member Patricius
since 2000-10-09
Posts 13989 |
Sunkissed, I love the flow of this and the way that it settled in my mind. Lovely write. |
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gemjop Member Elite
since 2002-11-18
Posts 2587Pencilveinia, USA |
Loved the ending in particular. calm. learning each day, for you and i, our paths have met, i've already learnt that you are love. |
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nakdthoughts Member Laureate
since 2000-10-29
Posts 19200Between the Lines |
To me, You were more than A carefully constructed phrase in time or space More than white candles Or lace praises that with a click can disappear like confessions on a deaf ear I am flawed, also but I guess it's a take me or leave me thing. I loved it all...*s M |
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