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dhicks03
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0 posted 2003-01-04 01:36 AM



Dream on dreamer...


for without dreams
the world it seems
would be a lonely
place of isolation


Sail on Sailor...


for without you
there would be
no dreams to sail
or tales to tell


Love on Lover...


for without love
there would be
no kindred spirit,
or God above


Write on Poet...


for without you
words would be
without rhyme
faded with time


Twinkle on Stars...


for without you
there would be
no dreamers
sailors,lovers,poets
or kindred spirit
to deliver it


Copyright ©1999-2001 Dennis Hicks



© Copyright 2003 Dennis Hicks - All Rights Reserved
passing shadows
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1 posted 2003-01-04 03:27 AM


very true! You summed it all up so well!
GG
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2 posted 2003-01-04 01:09 PM


this is sweet ..and has a nice flow.. I like it.

Always, Alyssa

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     (blink, breathe, stand, fight)

gemjop
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3 posted 2003-01-04 06:51 PM


wise and uplifting!
you said it all.
very much enjoyed this!



jeffwillett
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4 posted 2003-01-04 07:23 PM


Amazing flow...it managed to tell a story to me, complete with opening, middle, and conclusion.
dhicks03
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5 posted 2003-01-04 07:26 PM


Thank you all for your kind words. I appreciate them immensely!

Dennis

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6 posted 2003-01-04 07:30 PM


Dennis...So few words that say so much. Enjoyed. Thanks for sharing...Paul

"To share my poems with you is to share my heart with you"

vandana
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7 posted 2003-01-04 07:44 PM


ENJOY YOUR READ
Rainbowdust
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8 posted 2003-01-05 05:44 AM


Indeed. And into my library this goes.

The soul would have no rainbows, had the eyes no tears.

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