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the_jazzician
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since 2003-01-03
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0 posted 2003-01-03 02:06 PM




You often whisper words to me in my ear,
But theres so much noise around that I cant always hear,

You tell me when to run or how to climb a wall,
But when I can't hear your voice I sometimes trip or fall.

I can't see where we're going
but I feel the touch of your hand on mine knowing-
that were going somewhere
and I'm safe while Im in your care.

You would never leave me, that I know
but please just hold my hand tighter so I can never let go.


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passing shadows
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since 1999-08-26
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displaced
1 posted 2003-01-04 03:59 AM


do you doubt your ability to stay? The ending made me think that.
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