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WhiteRose
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somebody's dungeon

0 posted 2003-01-03 09:44 AM


You go so deep

penetrating the heart of me
becoming a vital part of me

snaking out in all directions
playing upon my affections

and I've become afraid

that separation is now impossible
not feasible, nor plausible
gone into night with solitary
where I lived in time alone.

WhiteRose 1/03/03

[This message has been edited by WhiteRose (01-03-2003 09:46 AM).]

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SPIRIT
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California Desert
1 posted 2003-01-03 10:26 AM


Nice! Very, very nice.

Truths, Lies and Imagination,
The way my life has been
The person that I truly am,
Is very rarely seen. ©das



Magnus
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2 posted 2003-01-03 09:07 PM


Hi Anne!!  Did he stay around?  Hope so!!

Happy New Year to ya...

lucky
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3 posted 2003-01-03 10:25 PM


I'd have to say "sweet"

lucky dale

Speaking of ghosts, and after such an eternity. . .wouldn't you know, here comes mine again...
~Rosemary J. Gwaltney~


garysgirl
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4 posted 2003-01-03 10:47 PM


Anne, this was good.......

I did wonder about the title, though........

"Love makes the world go around"
~~with love and hugs from Ethel~~  
                  

BluesSerenade
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since 2001-10-23
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By the Seaside
5 posted 2003-01-03 11:43 PM


It's a scary place when you're left all alone and it's hard not to look when your fear is staring you in the face.

Enjoyed the read Rosey~


Bill Charles
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highways, & byways, for now
6 posted 2003-01-04 01:51 PM


WhiteRose - I wish you the best during the new year. Things have a way of working themselves out in time. Best to you...

BC

Corinne
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state of confusion
7 posted 2003-01-04 03:38 PM


Sultry and inspirational!

Cor

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