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nakdthoughts
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Between the Lines

0 posted 2003-01-03 08:41 AM



Left in a place
where only thoughts can circulate,
the silence touches
and the sensitive responds.

~~and/or~~

A Moment's Rest

Reached for it, a moment's rest
needed by the sense of me.
A tear, one-eyed, slipped down face
as always, after loss of grace.

Reached for it, relaxed my wile,
remembered gift of Trader Joe's.
Fed my soul with pure delight
chocolate, almonds, mine tonight.

Shared the moment's rest with me,
to fill that need for sweetened taste.
I left behind, the worry of
recirculating thoughts of love.


M



"Love is not blind - It sees more and not less, but because it sees more, it is willing to see less."
(Will Moss)


[This message has been edited by nakdthoughts (01-03-2003 08:48 AM).]

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Gentle Spirit
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1 posted 2003-01-03 08:44 AM


Indeed it does M.........
well done.  *s*

nakdthoughts
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Between the Lines
2 posted 2003-01-03 08:46 AM


Hi there Donna, are you enjoying another snow/ice day?

hugssss
M

Gentle Spirit
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3 posted 2003-01-03 08:49 AM


shhh....yep I am, from work though......
shhh..........*w*

Enchantress
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Canada eh.
4 posted 2003-01-03 09:08 AM


Lovely morning thoughts here Maureen.
Much enjoyed the read.
~Morning hugs~

~Time has cast a spell on you,
  So you won't ever forget me~

passing shadows
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displaced
5 posted 2003-01-03 01:56 PM


just like me...in many ways
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