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Gentle Spirit Member Patricius
since 2000-10-09
Posts 13989
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Word Weavers They heal with their words, bringing light into the dark. Within their messages are held the universal truths of life. Hearts whisper across the pages quilled in the ink of their pain and the colors of their joy. There are moments shared when hearts are bared laid out on the line in verse that bleeds from the soul, spilling onto pages of yesterday and dreams of tomorrow. They speak in words that flow from veins that have lived life, having conquered and lost..... warriors weaving words while writing their journals in verses of rhyme through poetry divine, gifting to the world glimpses into the soul of a poet........ ©dmsmith 01-02-03 I could have missed the pain, but I would have had to miss the dance~ Garth [This message has been edited by Sunshine (01-03-2003 09:10 AM).] |
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Magnus
since 2001-10-10
Posts 14135South Carolina, USA |
Why do I feel as though I could have written this? Perhaps we share a common bond in our feelings? A common goal? I think so...and you have said very elegantly, very accurately exactly what I felt too... Thanx for this piece of your inner self... |
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Martie
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-09-21
Posts 28049California |
Donna--Poets are special, in that they can write emotion, not necessarily feel it any more than anyone else..they write it...and some read and say...ahhhh.  |
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Salty Senior Member
since 2002-11-23
Posts 669Texas |
Oh I love this....should be the theme poem of Passions.... absolutely beautiful !!! ~Salty In the Midst of movement and chaos, keep stillness inside of you. |
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SPIRIT Senior Member
since 2002-12-29
Posts 1745California Desert |
Beautiful! Gentle breezes, |
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garysgirl 
since 2002-09-29
Posts 19237Florida, USA |
Donna, your words express the feelings of everyone who loves poetry. And you said it so well, too....  "Love makes the world go around" |
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regards2you Member Elite
since 2002-10-01
Posts 3940California |
Donna, "Warriors weaving words", Great poem. Enjoyed the line above especially. Pat  ..without surrender, be on good terms with all persons.. |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
just beautiful! |
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Paul Wilson
since 2002-07-07
Posts 4711United States |
Donna~ Lovely words from the heart of a poet indeed. Thanks for sharing...Paul "To share my poems with you is to share my heart with you" |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
This is beautiful dear lady! I would like to think that we heal with our words... at least we all try...gosh, I love this. ~Morning hugs~ ~Time has cast a spell on you, |
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Sunshine
Administrator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
Some slight song of alliteration that slips this to the soul...as it should. |
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Cpat Hair
since 2001-06-05
Posts 11793 |
Perhaps the only difference between the poet and one that is not is the act of attempting to write it out rather than only hear the words inside... |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Gentle Spirit Beautiful write, very much enjoyed. |
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kaile
since 2000-02-06
Posts 5146singapore |
Donna, the title pulled me in...and boy, am i glad i am a fellow word-weaver wannabe!  |
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Auguste
since 2000-02-16
Posts 3953By the sea |
Very well and beautifully said, Donna. The stars will shine when I am gone, |
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Gentle Spirit Member Patricius
since 2000-10-09
Posts 13989 |
Hey Ya'll just wanted to stop in and say thanks for leaving your wonderful comments and I am glad that you enjoyed. I wish time allowed for single replies, but time is so short and there is so much to read! Peace all! |
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Gentle Spirit Member Patricius
since 2000-10-09
Posts 13989 |
Hey Ya'll just wanted to stop in and say thanks for leaving your wonderful comments and I am glad that you enjoyed. I wish time allowed for single replies, but time is so short and there is so much to read! Peace all! |
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sigheyes Member
since 2001-04-25
Posts 323the winds of destiny |
Donna you weave your words so lightly.... Hugs! Loved it. |
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scorpio Member Ascendant
since 2002-10-02
Posts 5178right...there |
Your words wove a look of awe apon my face...well written!! believe in what your heart feels... |
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PoeTik JusTice Member
since 2003-01-05
Posts 186California, USA |
Wow...I just have to say this poem is amazing! I totally loved it! Great work. XoXo Love Alwayz XoXo |
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Mistletoe Angel
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
 (big hugggsssssss) Oh Donna, I'm so sorry I haven't commented to this earlier and haven't e-mailed you the new stanza yet, I've been having trouble focusing with my loss on New Years and I promise soon I will have something new when I can think clear again! (sad sigh) This is lovely, sweet friend, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Donna, thank you for sharing! May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton "Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..." |
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Gentle Spirit Member Patricius
since 2000-10-09
Posts 13989 |
thanks everyone, and Noah, don't worry about it, I will be here when you get aroundtuit!!  Love and peace to poetry land! |
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