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Jeffrey Carter

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since 2000-04-08

Posts 2367
State of constant confusion!

0 posted 2003-01-02 05:55 PM

"Walking Alone"

Walking alone in yesterday's dreams
Finding tomorrow is not what it seems
Living my life day after day
Watching as you slowly walk away
Recalling old memories of love, once true
Knowing now, there's nothing left for me to do
So, I go on dreaming of love evermore
Yet, never forgetting all those who came before
So many memories, so little time
Keep them tucked in the back of my mind
Holding onto the good times, supressing the bad
If only I'd known back then all that I had!

I'm somewhere in between what is real and just a dream - Lifehouse

Magnus

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since 2001-10-10

Posts 14135
South Carolina, USA

1 posted 2003-01-02 06:34 PM

Jeffrey,

I think we have all walked this mile a time
or two in our lives...I know I certainly
have...

Nicely said...thanx

Martie

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since 1999-09-21

Posts 28049
California

2 posted 2003-01-02 07:08 PM

Hi Jeffrey...good to see you here. Life is like that..we trip and fall and remember the ache.

Janet Marie
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since 2000-01-22

Posts 18554

3 posted 2003-01-02 08:30 PM

HEEEEEEY YOU!!!!!!!!!!!!
whats up groovy guy!!
welcome back Jeffrey-boyeeeee
this is a bittersweet beauty you have penned..so good to see ya stop in poetry land again.

Will the wind remember the names it has blown in the past?
With this crutch, its old age and wisdom, it whispers no ... this will be the last.

jh

ThisDiamond
Member Rara Avis

since 2002-02-22

Posts 9353
Michigan, USA

4 posted 2003-01-02 08:52 PM

Said so well. Enjoyed. ThisDiamond

Alwye

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Member Elite

since 1999-06-16

Posts 3850
In the space between moments

5 posted 2003-01-02 10:17 PM

If only we knew what we had...only loss seems to make us appreciate it fully. Wonderful poem, I enjoyed reading.

*Krista Knutson*

"If we have no peace, it is because we've forgotten that we belong to each other." ~Mother Teresa

garysgirl

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since 2002-09-29

Posts 19237
Florida, USA

6 posted 2003-01-02 10:40 PM

Hi, Jeffrey....
Don't believe we've met. I'm garysgirl/Ethel. I must've have come here when you were gone. It sounds like you've been missed, so I'm glad to see you back, too.
I enjoyed your poem and hope to read more of your poetry......

"Love makes the world go around"
~~with love and hugs from Ethel~~

DawnG

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since 2000-06-23

Posts 1494
United States

7 posted 2003-01-03 12:50 PM

Jeff,

This poem is very good. I'm a bit confused by it's words though. I hope this is not true to life for you right now.

Dawn

passing shadows
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since 1999-08-26

Posts 45577
displaced

8 posted 2003-01-03 05:11 AM

woulda, shoulda, coulda...don't sweat the small stuff

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