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Jeffrey Carter

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since 2000-04-08

Posts 2367
State of constant confusion!

0 posted 2003-01-02 05:46 PM

"Oh, My Beautiful Luna"

How lonely your life must be sitting
up there in that window each night
Always there to shine down your loving
light upon my weary shoulders
Never wavering or faltering in your
presence just above the treetops
outside my window sill
Countless hours I have sat in wonder
and utter awe at the curves of your body
And traced my fingers downs the tracks
of scars that Father Time has put upon
your face
Out there all alone with only a few visitors
in all your many mellinia of existence
But you bring warmth and a sense of belonging
to this all too often lonely soul
Oh, my beautiful Luna, so far away
yet, so very close to my heart

I'm somewhere in between what is real and just a dream - Lifehouse

garysgirl

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since 2002-09-29

Posts 19237
Florida, USA

1 posted 2003-01-02 11:19 PM

Jeffrey, this is beautiful, but so sad...such a wistful feel to it. I liked it a lot...

"Love makes the world go around"
~~with love and hugs from Ethel~~

[This message has been edited by garysgirl (01-02-2003 11:20 PM).]

GG
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since 2002-12-03

Posts 3532
Lost in thought

2 posted 2003-01-03 02:22 AM

this is somewhat bitter-sweet ..it is quite beautiful, yet lonely. I like it alot though.
A good write.

Always, Alyssa

- And so it was that time stood still -
(blink, breathe, stand, fight)

regards2you
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since 2002-10-01

Posts 3940
California

3 posted 2003-01-03 02:26 AM

"yet so very close to my heart"

Perfect description for all of us.

Enjoyed, Pat

..without surrender, be on good terms with all persons..
"Desiderata"

passing shadows
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since 1999-08-26

Posts 45577
displaced

4 posted 2003-01-03 05:05 AM

beautiful and sad

Rainbowdust
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since 2002-12-05

Posts 320
Sydney, Australia

5 posted 2003-01-04 05:24 AM

I adored this Jeff... one for my library for sure!

The soul would have no rainbows, had the eyes no tears.

Diane Coway
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since 2002-08-01

Posts 61
USA

6 posted 2003-01-04 02:43 PM

hi.
One for my library too. I loved your poem, it was sad and beautiful. The luna is enchanting!!!! A lot of stories of what happens on a full moon.

Hugs,
Red

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